[release-notes/gnome-3-22] modifications suggested by hadess

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 66db657d862f49e5e2bb2a2561c0ec7814443c64
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri Sep 9 23:17:37 2016 +0100

    modifications suggested by hadess

 help/C/developers.page |   12 ++++++------
 help/C/index.page      |    4 ----
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index f9a5f97..92959aa 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -55,10 +55,10 @@
     for application distribution on Linux. While it is an independent project
     with its own release schedule, the GNOME project plans to make Flatpak an
     integral part of its application developer experience.</p>
-    <p>Since the &lastversion; release, Flatpak has made significant progress
-    and has continued to mature. An important milestone has been reached with
-    the introduction of a new set of APIs, called “portals”. These allow
-    sandboxed applications to access resources from the host system.</p>
+    <p>Since the GNOME &lastversion; release, Flatpak has made significant
+    progress and has continued to mature. An important milestone has been
+    reached with the introduction of a new set of APIs, called “portals”. These
+    allow sandboxed applications to access resources from the host system.</p>
     <p>GNOME 3.22’s developer technologies come with complete support for
     portals, through both GLib and GTK+. Supported portals include the file
     chooser, printing, URI opening, suspend/log out/idle inhibit, screenshots,
@@ -108,8 +108,8 @@
   <section id="gtk+">
   <title>GTK+ Improvements</title>
   <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-  <p>In addition to portals integration, other improvements in GTK+ 3.22
-  include:</p>
+  <p>In addition to Flatpak portals integration, other improvements in GTK+
+  3.22 include:</p>
   <list>
     <item><p>CSS blends modes. This is a common CSS feature that allows
     images to be programmatically transformed. Georges Stavracas,
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 33601c8..691bcb5 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -137,10 +137,6 @@
     bar, so it doesn’t get in the way, and the inclusion of extra information
     about connecting to servers, including which file protocols are supported.
     </p>
-    <p>Finally, it is now possible to open files that require additional
-    permissions using the <code>admin:///</code> prefix in the address bar.
-    This offers a safer alternative to opening files using <code>sudo</code>
-    from the command line, and can also be used from file open dialogs.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="keyboard-settings">