[gnome-initial-setup] software: Tweak the popover wording
- From: Matthias Clasen <matthiasc src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-initial-setup] software: Tweak the popover wording
- Date: Thu, 1 Sep 2016 15:51:35 +0000 (UTC)
commit f775414cb2bb4b415ec1891e79cf6d958232b0e9
Author: Matthias Clasen <mclasen redhat com>
Date: Mon Aug 29 11:31:56 2016 -0400
software: Tweak the popover wording
Some updates on the wording and the margins in the popover.
.../pages/software/gis-software-page.ui | 6 +++---
1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-initial-setup/pages/software/gis-software-page.ui
b/gnome-initial-setup/pages/software/gis-software-page.ui
index 9350d40..5b27464 100644
--- a/gnome-initial-setup/pages/software/gis-software-page.ui
+++ b/gnome-initial-setup/pages/software/gis-software-page.ui
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
<property name="margin-bottom">10</property>
<property name="wrap">True</property>
<property name="xalign">0</property>
- <property name="label" translatable="yes">Proprietary software is software that is owned by an
individual or company. There are often restrictions on its use and its source code cannot usually be
accessed.</property>
+ <property name="label" translatable="yes">Proprietary software typically has restrictions on how
it can be used and on access to its source code. This prevents anyone but the software owner from inspecting,
improving or learning from its code.</property>
</object>
</child>
<child>
@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@
<property name="xalign">0</property>
<property name="margin-start">20</property>
<property name="margin-end">20</property>
- <property name="margin-bottom">30</property>
- <property name="label" translatable="yes">This contrasts with Free Software, which can be freely
run, copied, distributed, studied and modified.</property>
+ <property name="margin-bottom">20</property>
+ <property name="label" translatable="yes">In contrast, Free Software can be freely run, copied,
distributed, studied and modified.</property>
</object>
</child>
</object>
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