[gimp-web/testing] Even more text fixes

[Alexandre Prokoudine <aprokoudine src gnome org>]

commit cae73c0ad98fcdf42ed90ce6e8576421260320ed
Author: Alexandre Prokoudine <alexandre prokoudine gmail com>
Date:   Fri Oct 7 11:49:23 2016 +0300

    Even more text fixes

 content/news/2016-10-06 Dialog Defaults/index.md |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/content/news/2016-10-06 Dialog Defaults/index.md b/content/news/2016-10-06 Dialog 
Defaults/index.md
index 959396a..7f1dfc5 100644
--- a/content/news/2016-10-06 Dialog Defaults/index.md  
+++ b/content/news/2016-10-06 Dialog Defaults/index.md  
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Authors: Alexandre Prokoudine
 Slug: making-settings-persistent
 Summary: Until fairly recently GIMP didn't do a very good job of remembering all the types of possible 
customizations. Upcoming v2.10 has some major improvements in that department.
 
-Until fairly recently GIMP didn't do a very good job of remembering all the kinds of customizations. If you 
applied a filter to an image and liked the combination of options that you used, there was no way you could 
save that combination for a later use. If you carefully chose selection stroking options, the next time you 
had to stroke a selection, you had to define settings all over again.
+Until fairly recently GIMP didn't do a very good job of remembering all the types of customizations. If you 
applied a filter to an image and liked the combination of options that you used, there was no way you could 
save that combination for a later use. If you carefully chose selection stroking options, the next time you 
had to stroke a selection, you had to define settings all over again.
 
 Upcoming v2.10 has some major improvements in that department.
 
@@ -13,13 +13,13 @@ Upcoming v2.10 has some major improvements in that department.
     <img src="{filename}gimp-2-9-5-filter-named-presets.jpg" alt="Adding a named preset for the Unsharp Mask 
filter in GIMP" width='975' height='442' />
 </figure>
 
-Early in the current development cycle we started porting existing GIMP filters to GEGL operations and using 
GEGL tool. This made it possible to automatically save each used combination as preset with a timestamp for a 
name, or manually&mdash;as a named preset. If you've been using v2.9.2 or v2.9.4, you most likely benefit 
from that already.
+Early in the current development cycle we started porting existing GIMP filters to GEGL operations and using 
the GEGL tool skeleton to wrap their GUIs into. This made it possible to automatically save each used 
combination as preset with a timestamp for a name, or manually&mdash;as a named preset. If you've been using 
v2.9.2 or v2.9.4, you most likely benefit from that already.
 
 <figure>
     <img src="{filename}gimp-2-9-5-masks-in-xcf.jpg" alt="Using masks for digital photrography in GIMP" 
width='975' height='596' />
 </figure>
 
-The second part of improvements started with reviewing a 
[patch](https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=759601) submitted by Benoit Touchette. The contributor 
came up with a clever idea to simplify adding new masks: clicking on layers' previews. Various modifier keys 
would additionally define whether you apply and remove the mask or just drop the mask entirely.
+The second part of improvements started with reviewing a 
[patch](https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=759601) submitted by Benoit Touchette. As a professional 
photographer, he regularly works on hundreds of photos daily and has an extensive use of masks, so he needs 
to get from A to B extremely fast. So Benoit came up with a clever idea to simplify adding new masks: 
clicking on layers' previews. Various modifier keys would additionally define whether you apply and remove 
the mask or just drop the mask entirely.
 
 <figure>
     <img src="{filename}gimp-2-9-5-easy-mask-create-tooltip.jpg" alt="Tooltips for handling masks quickly in 
GIMP" width='975' height='536' />