[release-notes/gnome-3-20] Be consistent about addressing You



commit f794099b35f48535ba1336bb3a576fbaf85a5f61
Author: Andreas Nilsson <anilsson redhat com>
Date:   Wed Mar 16 16:27:11 2016 +0100

    Be consistent about addressing You

 help/C/developers.page |   13 ++++++-------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
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--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -98,13 +98,12 @@
     <link href="https://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2016/02/22/building-an-xdg-app-part-3/";>part three</link>,
     <link href="https://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2016/02/23/building-an-xdg-app-part-4/";>part four</link>,
     <link href="https://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2016/02/26/building-an-xdg-app-part-5/";>part five</link>).</p>
-    <p>For those who want to try installing and running xdg-apps, a
-    collection of nightly GNOME applications is available to try. In addition
-    to being a great way to try xdg-app, this is also a great way to test
-    development versions of GNOME applications, and demonstrates xdg-app’s
-    ability to install multiple different versions of the same application at
-    the same time. For more information,
-    <link href="https://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2016/02/11/testing-unstable-gnome-using-xdg-app/";>
+    <p>If you want to try installing and running xdg-apps, acollection of 
+    nightly GNOME applications is available. In addition to being a great way 
+    to try xdg-app, this is also a great way to test development versions of 
+    GNOME applications, and demonstrates xdg-app’s ability to install multiple 
+    different versions of the same application at the same time. For more 
+    information, <link href="https://blogs.gnome.org/alexl/2016/02/11/testing-unstable-gnome-using-xdg-app/";>
     a tutorial is available</link>.</p>
     <p>Other significant changes in the 3.20 release include:</p>
     <list>


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