[release-notes/gnome-3-20] update the section headings



commit cc4b2f2cff9a32d25a9021c37ea5aa9b7d22cbf7
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Mar 16 11:19:00 2016 +0000

    update the section headings

 help/C/index.page |   12 ++++++------
 help/C/more.page  |   14 +++++++-------
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index d461b5f..59becbe 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
   work of local volunteers.</p>
 
   <section id="os-upgrades">
-    <title>Operating System Upgrades</title>
+    <title>Effortless Operating System Upgrades</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>It has always been possible to install software updates through the
     Software application. However, from 3.20, it is also possible to upgrade to
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="photo-editing">
-    <title>Photo Editing</title>
+    <title>Simple and Easy Photo Editing</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/photo-editing.png"/>
     <p>With 3.20, editing has arrived in Photos. The new editing controls are
     simple and easy to use, and all editing is non-destructive, so your
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="shortcut-windows">
-    <title>Shortcut Windows</title>
+    <title>Master all the Shortcuts!</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/shortcut-windows.png"/>
     <p>Shortcut windows are a new way to find out about shortcuts in GNOME
     applications. Each shortcut window lists the keyboard shortcuts and
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="media-controls">
-    <title>Integrated Media Controls</title>
+    <title>Quickly Access Media Controls</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/media-controls.png"/>
     <p>With GNOME 3.20, media controls are now built-in and displayed in the
     notification/clock area. This provides a way to quickly access media
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="polari">
-    <title>Polari</title>
+    <title>Upgrade Your IRC</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>3.20 has been a big release for Polari, GNOME’s IRC application. The
     online paste service feature that was introduced last release has been
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="files">
-    <title>Files</title>
+    <title>A More Polished Files Application</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/files-search.png"/>
     <p>The Files application has had a lot of polish and refinement for 3.20.
     Search has been a particular focus: search filters have been revamped, and
diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index 498a9ce..71e8825 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
   user interface font.</p>
 
   <section id="software-reviews">
-    <title>Software Reviews</title>
+    <title>Reviews Have Arrived in Software</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Software now lets you see what people think about the applications that
     are available to install. Each review gives an application a star rating,
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="location-services-privacy">
-    <title>Privacy Controls for Location Services</title>
+    <title>More Control Over Location Services</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/location-services-privacy.png"/>
     <p>Location services makes it possible for applications to find out your
     current location. This can be extremely useful, but it can also be a
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="web">
-    <title>Web</title>
+    <title>Enhanced Web Browser</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/web.png"/>
     <p>Web, the GNOME browser, has several major new features in 3.20, as well
     as many smaller improvements. Downloads are now shown in a popover that can
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="maps">
-    <title>Maps</title>
+    <title>Featureful Maps Application</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/maps.png"/>
     <p>The new version of Maps includes a large collection of improvements.
     The most significant of these include:</p>
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="cantarell">
-    <title>Improved Font</title>
+    <title>A More Refined Font</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/cantarell.png"/>
     <p>Cantarell – the default GNOME font – has had lots of improvements for
     3.20. Overall, text has a far better appearance, with letters looking more
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="dconf-editor">
-    <title>dconf Editor</title>
+    <title>Revamped dconf Editor</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/dconf-editor.png"/>
     <p>dconf Editor has had a facelift for 3.20. Settings lists have been
     overhauled, to give a better overview, with each row now including the
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="nibbles">
-    <title>Nibbles</title>
+    <title>Retro Arcade Fun</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/nibbles.png"/>
     <p>Nibbles has undergone a major transformation for this release! The new
     version has updated artwork and a fun, retro arcade style, including little


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