[release-notes/gnome-3-20] Don't talk about "users" in the location privacy section

[Andreas Nilsson <andreasn src gnome org>]

commit 4a4c2a6b5b06c04c471877c696ebde1308603b29
Author: Andreas Nilsson <anilsson redhat com>
Date:   Fri Mar 11 17:30:31 2016 +0100

    Don't talk about "users" in the location privacy section

 help/C/more.page |   22 ++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index dcbe1ce..95b7e03 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -122,16 +122,18 @@
   <section id="location-services-privacy">
     <title>Location Services Privacy Controls</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Users now have control over which applications have access to the
-    location services data. The first time an application tries to access your
-    location, a dialog box will prompt you for permission before giving access.
-    </p>
-    <p>An indicator will be displayed in the top bar while location services is
-    active.</p>
-    <p>All the applications that have asked for access to location data are
-    listed in the Privacy settings and here, you can individually toggle them
-    too. The location services can be disabled completely with the click of the
-    disable button in the system menu.</p>
+    <p>You'll now get better control over which application have access
+    to the location service data and not. The first time an application tries
+    to access your location, a dialog box will prompt you for permission
+    before giving access.</p>
+
+    <p>While the location service is active, an indicator will be displayed
+    in the top bar.</p>
+
+    <p>All applications that requests access to location data are listed in the
+    Privacy settings. There you can set the access for each individual
+    application. You can turn off the location services for the entire system
+    using the disable option in the system menu.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="nibbles">