[release-notes/gnome-3-20] index page - more refinement

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 41c3c1594e70df0976f895e1cde27af61bad3319
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 11 12:23:20 2016 +0000

    index page - more refinement

 help/C/index.page |   84 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------
 1 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 43 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 420460a..2738ad7 100644
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@@ -71,19 +71,18 @@
     including screen sharing and support for Wacom graphics tablets.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="shortcuts-windows">
-    <title>Shortcuts Windows</title>
+  <section id="shortcut-windows">
+    <title>Shortcut Windows</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Shortcuts windows are a new way to find out about shortcuts in GNOME
-    applications. Each window lists all the keyboard shortcuts and multitouch
-    gestures (such as for touchpads) for the app, along with their
+    <p>Shortcut windows are a new way to find out about shortcuts in GNOME
+    applications. Each shortcut window lists the keyboard shortcuts and
+    multitouch gestures (such as for touchpads) for an app, along with their
     corresponding functions. Groups and pages help with navigation, and search
-    allows you to find specific shortcuts you might be looking for.</p>
-
-    <p>Lots of GNOME applications have shortcut windows for 3.20, including
-    Files, Videos,  Photos, gedit,  Builder, Maps and many more. In each
+    allows you to find specific shortcuts that you might be looking for.</p>
+    <p>Many GNOME applications have shortcut windows for 3.20, including
+    Files, Videos,  Photos, gedit,  Builder, Maps and more. In each
     application, the shortcut window can be opened from the application menu,
-    or using the <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>?</key></keyseq> or
+    or by using the <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>?</key></keyseq> or
     <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>F1</key></keyseq> shortcut.</p>
   </section>
 
@@ -91,10 +90,10 @@
     <title>Photo Editing</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>With 3.20, editing has arrived in Photos. The new editing controls are
-    simple and easy to use. They allow crop and rotate, color adjustment and
-    picture enhancement. A selection of artistic filters are also available to
-    apply. All editing is non-destructive, so your original photo is preserved,
-    and changes can be undone.</p>
+    simple and easy to use, and all editing is non-destructive, so your
+    original photo is preserved, and changes can be undone. Editing functions
+    include crop and rotate, color adjustment and picture enhancement. A
+    selection of artistic filters are also available.</p>
     <p>Editing is accompanied by a new export feature, that allows you to
     generate copies of edited photos and share them. An option to export at a
     reduced size is useful for uploads and emailing.</p>
@@ -108,45 +107,44 @@
     <p>3.20 has been a big release for Polari, GNOME's IRC application. The
     online paste service feature that was introduced last release has been
     substantially improved. In addition to being able to paste blocks of text
-    for sharing, it is also possible to paste images directly into chats, where
-    they are shared using Imgur. In addition, paste links no longer have to be
-    separate chat posts.</p>
-    <p>Adding servers and rooms has been much improved for 3.20, also. It is
-    now possible to pick the server you want from a built in list, rather than
-    having to enter the address manually. This is not only easier, but also
-    ensures that the most secure connection is automatically selected. Server
-    properties are now accessed from the sidebar, which is more convenient and
-    natural, and server passwords can now be used (this is especially useful
-    when using bouncers, like ZNC).</p>
+    for sharing, it is now possible to paste images directly into chats, where
+    they are shared using <link href="http://imgur.com/";>Imgur</link>. In
+    addition, paste links no longer have to be separate chat posts.</p>
+    <p>Adding servers and rooms has also been improved for 3.20. Adding a
+    server is now just a matter of picking the one you want from a list, rather
+    than having to enter the address manually. This is not only easier, but also
+    ensures that the most secure connection is automatically selected.</p>
+    <p>In 3.20, server properties are now accessed from the sidebar, which is
+    more convenient and natural, and server passwords can now be used (this is
+    especially useful when using
+    <link href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BNC_(software)">bouncers</link>,
+    like <link href="http://wiki.znc.in/ZNC";>ZNC</link>).</p>
     <p>The new version of Polari also supports many more traditional IRC
     features, like the /msg command, tab completion for IRC commands, and the
     ability to open IRC links.</p>
-    <p>In addition to these features, there are a lot of smaller changes, such
-    as improved visuals and animations, smarter handling of status messages in
-    order to minimize noise in chatrooms, and additonal keyboard shortcuts (you
-    can check Polari's shortcut window for details).</p>
+    <p>In addition to these features, 3.20 includes a lot of smaller changes,
+    such as improved visuals and animations, smarter handling of status
+    messages in order to minimize noise in chatrooms, and additonal keyboard
+    shortcuts (see Polari's shortcut window for an overview).</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="files">
     <title>Files</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>The Files application has had a lot of polish and refinement for 3.20.
-    Search has been a particular focus. The new version includes a new search
-    filters interface, which allows filtering search results by when you
-    changed or edited the files last, or the type of file that you are looking
-    for. It is vastly simpler and easier to use than the previous version.
-    Search has also been made more robust in general: performance issues have
-    been addressed, and the interface should be faster and more responsive.</p>
+    Search has been a particular focus: the new version includes an updated
+    search filters interface, which allows filtering search results by when
+    files were changed or edited last, or by type of file. It is vastly simpler
+    and easier to use than the previous version. Search has also been made more
+    robust: performance issues have been addressed, and the interface is faster
+    and more responsive.</p>
     <p>Files also has a more compact, easier to understand preferences dialog
-    for 3.20. Settings have been added for showing permanent delete and create
-    symbolic link actions, as well as for how recursive search should behave
-    show action to create symbolic links, options for where recursive search
-    should be used.</p>
-    <p>Files' views have also been enhanced, with additional zoom levels
-    (including a smaller zoom level in icon view), and bigger thumbnails to
-    give a better view.</p>
-    <p>Finally, available and remaining space for drives is now displayed in
-    the other places view.</p>
+    for 3.20. This includes additional settings for showing the permanent
+    delete and create symbolic link actions, as well as for recursive search
+    behavior.</p>
+    <p>Smaller improvements include an extra zoom level in the list and grid
+    views, bigger thumbnails, and the display of available and remaining space
+    for drives in the other places view.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">