[gnome-initial-setup/software-sources] software: Tweak the popover wording



commit 44e5532b808631f162e57accd3cfcce879200c6c
Author: Matthias Clasen <mclasen redhat com>
Date:   Mon Aug 29 11:31:56 2016 -0400

    software: Tweak the popover wording
    
    Some updates on the wording and the margins in the popover.

 .../pages/software/gis-software-page.ui            |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-initial-setup/pages/software/gis-software-page.ui 
b/gnome-initial-setup/pages/software/gis-software-page.ui
index 9350d40..5b27464 100644
--- a/gnome-initial-setup/pages/software/gis-software-page.ui
+++ b/gnome-initial-setup/pages/software/gis-software-page.ui
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
             <property name="margin-bottom">10</property>
             <property name="wrap">True</property>
             <property name="xalign">0</property>
-            <property name="label" translatable="yes">Proprietary software is software that is owned by an 
individual or company. There are often restrictions on its use and its source code cannot usually be 
accessed.</property>
+            <property name="label" translatable="yes">Proprietary software typically has restrictions on how 
it can be used and on access to its source code. This prevents anyone but the software owner from inspecting, 
improving or learning from its code.</property>
           </object>
         </child>
         <child>
@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@
             <property name="xalign">0</property>
             <property name="margin-start">20</property>
             <property name="margin-end">20</property>
-            <property name="margin-bottom">30</property>
-            <property name="label" translatable="yes">This contrasts with Free Software, which can be freely 
run, copied, distributed, studied and modified.</property>
+            <property name="margin-bottom">20</property>
+            <property name="label" translatable="yes">In contrast, Free Software can be freely run, copied, 
distributed, studied and modified.</property>
           </object>
         </child>
       </object>


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