[gnome-user-docs] Minor changes, clock-world, clock-calendar

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 36d9a03e2a771380f5ba957c7ac0c927667393b6
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Wed Sep 30 18:05:41 2015 -0400

    Minor changes, clock-world, clock-calendar

 gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page |   27 ++++-----------------------
 gnome-help/C/clock-world.page    |    4 +++-
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
index 3b5bb55..fcc8cf0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
     <p>This requires you to use your <app>Evolution</app> calendar or for you
     to have an online account set up which <gui>Calendar</gui> supports.</p>
     <p>Most distributions come with <app>Evolution</app> installed by default.
-    If yours does not, you may need to install it using your distribution
+    If yours does not, you may need to install it using your distribution's
     package manager.</p>
  </note>
 
@@ -52,12 +52,12 @@
       calendar.</p>
 
     <note>
-       <p>A small dot is shown under each date that has an appointment.</p>
+       <p>A dot is shown under each date that has an appointment.</p>
     </note>
 
       <p>Existing appointments will be displayed to the left of the calendar.
-      As appointments are added to the calendar, they will appear in the
-      clock's appointment list.</p>
+      As appointments are added to your <app>Evolution</app> calendar, they
+      will appear in the clock's appointment list.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -74,23 +74,4 @@
  </if:when>
  </if:choose>
 
-  <p>To quickly get to the full <app>Evolution</app> calendar, click on the
-  clock and click <gui>Open Calendar</gui>.</p>
-
-  <note>
-    <p>This will work only if you have an existing <app>Evolution</app>
-    account. Otherwise, a window will appear with the necessary steps for
-    adding your first account.</p>
-  </note>
-
- <comment>
-    <cite date="2012-02-19" href="mailto:nruz alumnos inf utfsm cl">Natalia Ruz</cite>
-    <p>Should have some information or link to "how to add a mail account to
-    Evolution", and possibly an image (but maybe a screenshot is too big).</p>
-</comment>
-<comment>
-    <cite date="2012-02-19" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">mdhill</cite>
-    <p>Link to app-evolution-setup.page.stub.</p>
-</comment>
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
index 85893e7..590b094 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
@@ -4,7 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="clock" group="#last"/>
-    <link type="seealso" href="help:gnome-clocks/index"/>
+    <link type="seealso" href="help:gnome-clocks/index">
+      <title>Clocks Help</title>
+    </link>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>