[gnome-user-docs] sound-volume style fixed, marked as final

[Jana Svarova <jsvarova src gnome org>]

commit b8e86e9ee666450e20248c610b9322d3ce2048d1
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date:   Wed Sep 30 17:38:19 2015 -0400

    sound-volume style fixed, marked as final

 gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page |   43 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
index 0f43f8b..ff103b3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -28,34 +29,50 @@
 
   <p>To change the sound volume, open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#yourname">system
   menu</gui> from the right side of the top bar and move the volume slider left
-  or right. You can completely turn off sound by dragging the slider all the
-  way to the left.</p>
+  or right. You can completely turn off sound by dragging the slider to the
+  left.</p>
 
   <p>Some keyboards have keys that let you control the volume. They normally
   look like stylized speakers with waves coming out of them. They are often
   near the "F" keys at the top. On laptop keyboards, they are usually on the
   "F" keys.  Hold down the <key>Fn</key> key on your keyboard to use them.</p>
 
-  <p>Of course, if you have external speakers, you can also change the volume
-  using the volume control on the speakers themselves. Some headphones have a
+  <p>If you have external speakers, you can also change the volume
+  using the speakers' volume control. Some headphones have a
   volume control too.</p>
 
 <section id="apps">
  <title>Changing the sound volume for individual applications</title>
 
-  <p>You can change the volume for one application, but leave the volume for
+  <p>You can change the volume for one application and leave the volume for
   others unchanged. This is useful if you are listening to music and browsing
   the web, for example. You might want to turn off the audio in the web browser
   so sounds from websites do not interrupt the music.</p>
+
   <p>Some applications have volume controls in their main windows. If your
-  application has one of these, use that to change the volume. Otherwise, open
-  <app>Settings</app> from the <gui>Activities</gui> overview and click
-  <gui>Sound</gui>. Go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and change the volume
-  of the application there.</p>
-  <p>Only applications that are playing sounds will be listed. If an
-  application is playing sounds but is not listed, it might not support the
-  feature that lets you control its volume in this way. In that case, you
-  cannot change its volume.</p>
+  application has its volume control, use that to change the volume. If not:</p>
+
+    <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Sound</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and change the volume of the
+      application listed there.</p>
+
+  <note style="tip">
+    <p>Only applications that are playing sounds are listed. If an
+    application is playing sounds but is not listed, it might not support the
+    feature that lets you control its volume in this way. In such case, you
+    cannot change its volume.</p>
+  </note>
+    </item>
+
+  </steps>
 
 </section>