[gnome-user-docs] Further updates to clock-* pages

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit c76e02c03eb111e1bff6442b66d33bd614120449
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Wed Sep 30 17:31:54 2015 -0400

    Further updates to clock-* pages

 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page      |   25 ++++++++++++-------------
 gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page |    8 ++++++--
 gnome-help/C/clock-world.page    |   20 +++++++++++++++++---
 3 files changed, 35 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index e6a4102..4bd203f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -36,25 +36,24 @@
       overview and start typing <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> to open the control center.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>If you have a standard account, you will need to click
-      <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the
-      <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator password</link>.</p>
-    </item>
+      <p>If you have <gui>Automatic Date &amp; Time</gui> set to <gui>ON</gui>,
+      your date and time should update automatically if you have an internet
+      connection. To update your date and time manually, set this to
+      <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
+    </item> 
     <item>
-      <p>If you have an internet connection, you can set your date, time and
-      time zone to update automatically by switching <gui>Automatic Date &amp;
-      Time</gui> and <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
-      <p>If you do not have an internet connection, you can update these
-      manually by switching them to <gui>OFF</gui>, then clicking <gui>Date
-      &amp; Time</gui> and <gui>Time Zone</gui> to update.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>, then adjust the time and date.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by selecting
-      <gui>24-hour</gui> or <gui>AM/PM</gui> format.</p>
+      <p>You can change how the hour is displayed by selecting
+      <gui>24-hour</gui> or <gui>AM/PM</gui> for <gui>Time Format</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>You may also wish to <link xref="clock-timezone">set the timezone
+  manually</link>.</p>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index 768ec8a..5d51941 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.16" date="2015-01-26" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -37,8 +38,11 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date
-      &amp; Time Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>      
+      overview and start typing <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you have <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> set to <gui>ON</gui>, your
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
index 2b256ac..85893e7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-world.page
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="clock" group="#last"/>
+    <link type="seealso" href="help:gnome-clocks/index"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -46,10 +47,23 @@
 
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Existing appointments will be displayed on the right. As appointments
-      are added to the calendar, they will appear in the clock's appointment
+      <p>In the <app>Clocks</app> window, click
+      <gui style="button">New</gui> button or
+      <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq> to add a new city.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Start typing the name of the city into the search.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the correct city or the closest location to you from the
       list.</p>
     </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Add</gui> to finish adding the city.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>Refer to the <link href="help:gnome-clocks">Clocks Help</link> for more
+  of the capabilities of <app>Clocks</app>.</p>
+
 </page>