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[gnome-user-docs] Marked more net- pages final, contacts-* review

commit 820722c5c79ca53a80ce25903d9efd722918ee53
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 29 17:20:21 2015 -0400

    Marked more net- pages final, contacts-* review

 gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page           |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page              |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page         |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page          |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page               |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page                |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/contacts.page                      |    3 +-
 gnome-help/C/figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg |   32 ++++++++++------------
 gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page           |    3 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page            |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page             |    6 +++-
 11 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page
index 83e1c98..0b82fe6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-add-remove.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-27" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Lucie Hankey</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
index afcb476..e81e289 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-connect.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-27" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page
index b618bf8..3b3dfea 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-edit-details.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-27" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
index db0170c..92832e8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-link-unlink.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-27" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-27" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.15" date="2015-01-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page
index 90378b6..88d93bc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-search.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
index df8383f..8b34d39 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts-setup.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-02-26" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.91" date="2014-09-05" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/contacts.page b/gnome-help/C/contacts.page
index f0b9bfd..a1398c8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/contacts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/contacts.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
   <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-13" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -23,4 +24,4 @@
 <p>Use <app>Contacts</app> to store, access or edit information for your
  contacts, locally or in your <link xref="accounts">Online Accounts</link>.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg b/gnome-help/C/figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg
index 1997509..c6bfaa8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg
+++ b/gnome-help/C/figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
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xmlns:sodipodi='http://sodipodi.sourceforge.net/DTD/sodipodi-0.dtd' 
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xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2000/svg' width='16'>
+<svg xmlns:cc='http://creativecommons.org/ns#' xmlns:dc='http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/' 
sodipodi:docname='network-wired-symbolic.svg' 
inkscape:export-filename='/home/sam/dev/RESOURCES/gnome-icon-theme-symbolic/src/gnome-stencils.png' 
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@@ -11,24 +11,22 @@
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inkscape:window-width='1577' inkscape:window-x='198' inkscape:window-y='125' inkscape:zoom='1'>
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
index 9b1f15d..e095eba 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-on-off.page
@@ -4,10 +4,11 @@
       id="net-firewall-on-off">
 
   <info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="net-security" group="#first"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Paul W. Frields</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
index f0993db..ce8e908 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-firewall-ports.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-firewall-on-off"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Paul W. Frields</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index c8f9fa6..7f74413 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -23,8 +23,10 @@
   <title>Connect to a wired (Ethernet) network</title>
 
   <p>To set up most wired network connections, all you need to do is plug in a
-  network cable. The network icon on the top bar should spin or pulse for a few
-  seconds and then will change to a "socket" icon when you are connected.</p>
+  network cable. The wired network icon
+  (<media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>) is displayed
+  on the top bar with three dots while the connection is being established. The
+  dots disappear when you are connected.</p>
 
   <p>If this does not happen, you should first of all make sure that your
   network cable is plugged in. One end of the cable should be plugged into the
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