[gnome-user-docs] Mark net- pages final, sharing- pages for review

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 0f7ec95e7e2dfb498bf92584a69915b3d66f5f51
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 29 16:00:09 2015 -0400

    Mark net- pages final, sharing- pages for review

 gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page     |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-findip.page           |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-general.page          |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page    |    9 +++++----
 gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page       |    9 +++++----
 gnome-help/C/net-problem.page          |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-security.page         |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-slow.page             |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page      |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page        |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page     |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/sharing.page              |    2 ++
 14 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
index f7b6344..4bf5c39 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-connect.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.6.0" date="2012-10-06" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-12" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <desc>View and edit files on another computer over FTP, SSH, Windows
     shares, or WebDAV.</desc>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
index 1bd34cd..fdb34d1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
       <p>Click the
       <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
       button to see the IP address for the wireless network in the
-      <gui>Details</gui> pane.</p>
+      <gui>Details</gui> panel.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
index a2148cb..ec7501e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@
       <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the left pane, select the network connection that you want to set
-      up manually. If you plug in to the network with a cable, click
+      <p>In the left pane, select the network connection that you want to give
+      a fixed address. If you plug in to the network with a cable, click
       <gui>Wired</gui>, then click the
       <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media> button in the lower right corner of
       the panel. For a <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection, the 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-general.page b/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
index ef339d1..1fcf688 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-general.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>The Ubuntu Documentation Team</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
index 865f772..595bef1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
       <p>Click the
       <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
       button to see the MAC address for the wireless device displayed as the
-      <gui>Hardware Address</gui> in the <gui>Details</gui> pane.</p>
+      <gui>Hardware Address</gui> in the <gui>Details</gui> panel.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
index cae7a8a..c2fbf9d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersconnect.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -52,12 +53,12 @@
       <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> from the list on the left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the connection details by pressing on the
-      <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.svg" 
width="16" height="16"><span its:translate="yes">details</span></media></gui>
-      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for wireless network.</p>
+      <p>Click the 
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media> button to open the connection
+      details.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Identity</gui> from the panel on the left side.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Identity</gui> from the pane on the left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>At the bottom of the <gui>Identity</gui> panel, check the <gui>Make
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page b/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
index 3e2d715..3e83e7e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-othersedit.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-31" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -72,12 +73,12 @@
       <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> from the list on the left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the connection details by pressing on the
-      <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.svg" 
width="16" height="16"><span its:translate="yes">details</span></media></gui>
-      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for wireless network.</p>
+      <p>Click the 
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media> button to open the connection
+      details.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Identity</gui> from the panel on the left side.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Identity</gui> from the pane on the left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>At the bottom of the <gui>Identity</gui> panel, check the <gui>Make
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page b/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
index e047a15..4ac397c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-problem.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-21" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>The Ubuntu Documentation Team</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-security.page b/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
index eed4bc6..b1bbd85 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-security.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-21" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>The Ubuntu Documentation Team</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
index 8d743a3..54d3122 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-slow.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-21" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index 4ed321d..ffb3849 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-sharing"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2015-01-25" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
index eb10960..b2f71e6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
index b477e5b..c40a484 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.1" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
index 2fae032..1e44ece 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing.page
@@ -6,6 +6,8 @@
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net" group="#sharing"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
+
     <desc>
       <link xref="sharing-desktop">Desktop sharing</link>,
       <link xref="files-share">Share files by email</link>,