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[gnome-user-docs] Update various net-pages for conformity

commit 77501bb62ca42ccd4be3fdaf266ebe4b454685ee
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 29 13:32:57 2015 -0400

    Update various net-pages for conformity

 gnome-help/C/net-findip.page             |    7 ++++---
 gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page   |   19 ++++++++++++-------
 gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page         |   19 ++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page      |   11 ++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page |   10 +++++++---
 gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page      |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-wired.page              |    3 ++-
 7 files changed, 42 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
index 57c4180..1bd34cd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
@@ -50,14 +50,15 @@
       <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or <gui>Wired</gui> from the left pane,
-      according to the network connection whose IP address you want.</p>
+      <p>Choose which connection, <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or <gui>Wired</gui>, from
+      the left pane.</p>
       <p>The IP address for a wired connection will be displayed on the
       right.</p>
       
       <p>Click the
       <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
-      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for the wireless network.</p>
+      button to see the IP address for the wireless network in the
+      <gui>Details</gui> pane.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
index 1588bd8..a2148cb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-fixed-ip-address.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-13" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.15" date="2014-12-04" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -19,6 +20,10 @@
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -44,13 +49,13 @@
       <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or <gui>Wired</gui> from the list on the
-      left.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Press the settings button next to the Wi-Fi network or at the
-      bottom-right of the wired connection dialog to open the network
-      settings.</p>
+      <p>In the left pane, select the network connection that you want to set
+      up manually. If you plug in to the network with a cable, click
+      <gui>Wired</gui>, then click the
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media> button in the lower right corner of
+      the panel. For a <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection, the 
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
+      button will be located next to the active network.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click on the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> or <gui>IPv6 Settings</gui> tab
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
index 3adf148..865f772 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-macaddress.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -52,15 +53,15 @@
       <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or <gui>Wired</gui> from the list on the left,
-      depending on which device you want to check.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Your MAC address will be displayed as the <gui>Hardware Address</gui>
-      on the right for a wired connection, or open the connection details by
-      pressing on the
-      <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.svg" 
width="16" height="16"><span its:translate="yes">details</span></media></gui>
-      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for wireless network.</p>
+      <p>Choose which device, <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or <gui>Wired</gui>, from
+      the left pane.</p>
+      <p>The MAC address for the wired device will be displayed as the
+      <gui>Hardware Address</gui> on the right.</p>
+      
+      <p>Click the
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
+      button to see the MAC address for the wireless device displayed as the
+      <gui>Hardware Address</gui> in the <gui>Details</gui> pane.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page b/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
index cc5905e..e9a4f50 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-security-tips.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-21" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Steven Richards</name>
@@ -64,11 +65,11 @@
       information is compromised by identity thieves or other criminals.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Be careful in providing any application
-      <link xref="user-admin-explain">root level permissions</link>, especially
-      ones that you have not used before or which are not well-known. Providing
-      anyone or anything with root level permissions puts your computer at high
-      risk to exploitation.</p>
+      <p>Be careful in providing
+      <link xref="user-admin-explain">root level permissions</link> to any
+      application, especially ones that you have not used before or which are
+      not well-known. Providing anyone or anything with root level permissions
+      puts your computer at high risk to exploitation.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Make sure you are only running necessary remote-access services.
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
index fd94baa..d852d82 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
@@ -7,12 +7,16 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-general"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     </credit>
-
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
     <desc>An IP Address is like a phone number for your computer.</desc>
@@ -37,8 +41,8 @@
     IP addresses are temporarily assigned each time your computer connects to a
     network. Static IP addresses are fixed, and do not change. Dynamic IP
     addresses are more common that static addresses - static addresses are
-    typically only used when there is a special need for them, such as
-    administering a server.</p>
+    typically only used when there is a special need for them, such as in the
+    administration of a server.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index af55bc9..c8f9fa6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wired"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
index 6a8f6da..eb321a2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
 
@@ -20,4 +21,4 @@
 
 <title>Wired Networking</title>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
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