[gnome-user-docs] Update net-findip, review net-browser, -proxy



commit d016035076c218feaa48d09da410cf7522472343
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 29 11:30:40 2015 -0400

    Update net-findip, review net-browser, -proxy

 gnome-help/C/net-browser.page |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-findip.page  |   18 +++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page   |    1 +
 3 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
index d5fadfe..eb1c468 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>The Ubuntu Documentation Team</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
index b35c6d7..57c4180 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-findip.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -49,15 +50,14 @@
       <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or <gui>Wired</gui> from the list on the left,
-      depending on which network connection you want to find the IP address
-      for.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>You will see the IP address for a wired connection on the right, or
-      open the connection details by pressing on the
-      <gui style="button"><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system-symbolic.svg" 
width="16" height="16"><span its:translate="yes">details</span></media></gui>
-      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for wireless network.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> or <gui>Wired</gui> from the left pane,
+      according to the network connection whose IP address you want.</p>
+      <p>The IP address for a wired connection will be displayed on the
+      right.</p>
+      
+      <p>Click the
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
+      button to see the <gui>Details</gui> for the wireless network.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
index d64eb87..3186fbc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-proxy.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>


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