[gnome-user-docs] Marking some candidate pages final



commit c03c1eb22600b8cacbe8ba4ce3932b5fa73b7d5f
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm redhat com>
Date:   Tue Sep 29 10:07:58 2015 -0400

    Marking some candidate pages final

 gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page |   12 ++++++------
 gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page    |    6 +++++-
 gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page |    2 +-
 5 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
index 74a79f0..f5c8a5e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-07" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -58,11 +58,11 @@
   <item>
     <p>Use the <gui>Power</gui> panel in <app>Settings</app> to change
     your power settings. There are a number of options that will help to save
-    power: you can <!--display-dimscreen is a stub. Please add the link back
+    power: you can <!--TODO: display-dimscreen is a stub. Please add the link back
     when it's unstubbed.-Aruna<link xref="display-dimscreen">-->automatically
     dim the display after a certain time, <!--display-dimscreen is a stub.
     Please add the link back when it's unstubbed.-Aruna
-    <link xref="display-dimscreen">-->reduce the display brightness and have
+    <link xref="display-dimscreen">-->reduce the display brightness, and have
     the computer <link xref="power-suspend">automatically suspend</link> if you
     have not used it for a certain period of time.</p>
   </item>
@@ -81,14 +81,14 @@
    <item>
      <p><!--display-dimscreen is a stub. Please add the link back when it's
      unstubbed.-Aruna<link xref="display-dimscreen">-->Reduce the screen
-     brightness: powering the screen accounts for a significant fraction of a
+     brightness. Powering the screen accounts for a significant fraction of a
      laptop power consumption.</p>
      <p>Most laptops have buttons on the keyboard (or a keyboard shortcut) that
      you can use to reduce the brightness.</p>
    </item>
    <item>
      <p>If you do not need an Internet connection for a little while, turn off
-     the wireless/Bluetooth card. These devices work by broadcasting radio
+     the wireless or Bluetooth cards. These devices work by broadcasting radio
      waves, which takes quite a bit of power.</p>
      <p>Some computers have a physical switch that can be used to turn it off,
      whereas others have a keyboard shortcut that you can use instead. You can
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
      Computers use more power when they have more work to do.</p>
      <p>Most of your running applications do very little when you are not
      actively using them. However, applications that frequently grab data from
-     the internet, play music or movies can impact your power consumption.</p>
+     the internet or play music or movies can impact your power consumption.</p>
    </item>
  </list>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
index 9be4682..d318ce9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-08" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -57,6 +57,10 @@
   <note style="important">
     <p>You need to have the <app>Tweak Tool</app> installed on your computer to
     change this setting.</p>
+    <if:if test="action:install" xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/";>
+      <p><link style="button" action="install:gnome-tweak-tool">Install
+      <app>Tweak Tool</app></link></p>
+    </if:if>
   </note>
 
   <p>If you do not want the computer to suspend when you close the lid, you can
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page b/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
index 0391354..01822fa 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
 
     <desc>Allowing the battery to completely discharge is bad for it.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
index 1da08e1..0cd7ff0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-29" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
index b6b1ef9..95ade77 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-bluetooth.page
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-08" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-10-13" status="candidate"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>


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