[gnome-user-docs] Finalize more net- pages

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 911fe945cec70d6ea3c0557c2ec19faffaedddcb
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 21:32:19 2015 -0400

    Finalize more net- pages

 gnome-help/C/net-manual.page                       |   14 ++++------
 gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page                  |    6 ++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page            |   26 +++++++++++++-------
 ...et-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page |    4 ++-
 4 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index 56e9db3..da78acd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -36,20 +37,17 @@
     <title>To manually set your network settings:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Settings</gui> to open the control center.</p>
+      start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>In the left pane, select the network connection that you want to set
-      up manually and click the
-      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
-      button. For example, if you plug in to the network with a cable, click
-      <gui>Wired</gui>. For a <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection, the 
+      up manually. If you plug in to the network with a cable, click
+      <gui>Wired</gui>, then click the
+      <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media> button in the lower right corner of
+      the panel. For a <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> connection, the 
       <media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media>
       button will be located next to the active network.</p>
       <p>Make sure that your wireless card is turned on or a network cable is
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
index 83bb0aa..1b2019a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
       start typing <gui>Network</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the control center.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Network</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>At the bottom of the list on the left, click the <gui>+</gui> button
@@ -90,8 +90,8 @@
       <p>Hopefully you will successfully connect to the VPN. If not, you may
       need to double-check the VPN settings you entered. You can do this from
       the <gui>Network</gui> panel that you used to create the connection.
-      Select the VPN connection from the list, then press the round settings
-      button.</p>
+      Select the VPN connection from the list, then press the
+<media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/emblem-system.png"><span 
its:translate="yes">settings</span></media> button to review the settings.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>To disconnect from the VPN, click the system menu on the top bar and
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
index 922beaf..0d56e63 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -26,15 +27,22 @@
  for example). To do this:</p>
 
 <steps>
- <item><p>Click the system status area on the top bar and select
-  <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>.</p>
- </item>
- <item><p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
-  <p>Switch <gui>Airplane Mode</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>. This will turn off your
- wireless connection until you switch airplane mode off again.</p>
- </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right
+    side of the top bar.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Select the name of your wireless network
+    (<media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-wireless-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16"/>). The Wi-Fi
+    section of the menu will expand.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Switch <gui>Airplane Mode</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>. This will turn off
+    your wireless connection until you switch airplane mode off again.</p>
+  </item>
 </steps>
 
 <note><p>Using <em>Airplane Mode</em> will completely turn off both wireless
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page
index 94cc43b..adbdf7d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-05" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -46,8 +47,9 @@
       to get the drivers for certain adapters working properly. Go to the list
       for your distribution (for example,
       <link href="https://help.ubuntu.com/community/WifiDocs/WirelessCardsSupported";>Ubuntu</link>,
+      <link href="https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Wireless_network_configuration";>Arch</link>
       <link href="http://linuxwireless.org/en/users/Drivers";>Fedora</link> or
-      <link href="http://en.opensuse.org/HCL:Network_(Wireless)">openSuSE</link>)
+      <link href="http://en.opensuse.org/HCL:Network_(Wireless)">openSUSE</link>)
       and see if your make and model of wireless adapter is listed. You may be
       able to use some of the information there to get your wireless drivers
       working.</p>