[gnome-user-docs] Review user-*

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <kat src gnome org>]

commit 5e0333364dcdd3cd4701c5d397b180cdcfcdbe4d
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 21:08:25 2015 -0400

    Review user-*

 gnome-help/C/user-add.page            |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page   |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page  |   10 +++++-----
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page |   10 +++++-----
 gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page      |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page |    2 +-
 6 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index ac90a5a..b0a3c3e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage" group="#first"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
index 84c6c36..c4668f9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>You can change which users are allowed to make changes to the system
-    by giving them administrative privileges.</desc>
+    <desc>You can allow users to make changes to the system by giving them
+    administrative privileges.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change who has administrative privileges</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
index e4fba3d..9150d79 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-explain.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@
 
   <p>As well as the files that <em>you</em> create, your computer has a number
   of files which are needed by the system for it to work properly. If these
-  important <em>system files</em> are changed improperly they can cause various
-  things to break, so they are protected from changes by default. Certain
-  applications also modify important parts of the system, and so are also
-  protected.</p>
+  important <em>system files</em> are changed incorrectly they can cause
+  various things to break, so they are protected from changes by default.
+  Certain applications also modify important parts of the system, and so are
+  also protected.</p>
 
   <p>The way that they are protected is by only allowing users with
   <em>administrative privileges</em> to change the files or use the
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
index e3c74bf..5a60ede 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-problems.page
@@ -11,9 +11,10 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
+    <!-- TODO: review that this is actually correct -->
     <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
-    <credit type="author">
+    <credit type="authohar">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
@@ -24,7 +25,7 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>You can only do some things, like installing applications, if you
+    <desc>You can do some things, like installing applications, only if you
     have administrative privileges.</desc>
   </info>
 
@@ -39,9 +40,8 @@
       <p>connecting to networks or wireless networks,</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>viewing the contents of a removable disk connected to the computer, or
-      the contents of a different disk partition (for example, a Windows
-      partition), or</p>
+      <p>viewing the contents of a different disk partition (for example, a
+      Windows partition), or</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>installing new applications.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page b/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
index f847b2f..1853299 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-autologin.page
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-exit" />
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-04-04" status="review" />
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-04" status="review" />
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review" />
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index 79bcb30..4d97a23 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
   </comment>
 
   <p>It is a good idea to change your password from time to time, especially if
-  you think someone else knows what your password is.</p>
+  you think someone else knows your password.</p>
 
   <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
   to edit user accounts other than your own.</p>