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[gnome-user-docs] Finalize net-mobile, review troubleshooting pages

commit 2fc0116425694e8749ec139fe780ca219c8a4901
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 19:51:25 2015 -0400

    Finalize net-mobile, review troubleshooting pages

 gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page                       |   13 +++++++------
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page       |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page                |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page        |    5 +++--
 ...et-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page |    3 ++-
 ...net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page |    5 +++--
 ...net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page |    5 +++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page     |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page              |    1 +
 9 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page b/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
index 21dcf31..8329776 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide"  xref="net-wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-11-10" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -29,13 +29,14 @@
 
   <title>Connect to mobile broadband</title>
 
-  <p>Set up a connection to a cellular (3G) network using your mobile phone
-  or Internet stick.</p>
+  <p>You can set up a connection to a cellular (3G) network with your
+  computer's built-in 3G modem, your mobile phone, or an Internet stick.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Connect your phone or Internet stick to a USB port on your
-    computer.</p></item>
-  <item>
+    <item><p>If you do not have a built-in 3G modem, connect your phone or
+    Internet stick to a USB port on your computer.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
     <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right
     side of the top bar.</p>
   </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
index 3f04a20..e9ecef0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
index 49ede4f..fb1a47f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page
index 41faa7a..397805e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -24,7 +25,7 @@
 
 <list>
  <item>
-  <p>Double-check that you have the right password</p>
+  <p>Double-check that you have the correct password</p>
   <p>Passwords are case-sensitive (it matters whether they have capital or lower-case letters), so check 
that you didn't get the case of one of the letters wrong.</p>
  </item>
 
@@ -39,7 +40,7 @@
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>Check that you're using the right type of wireless security</p>
+  <p>Check that you're using the correct type of wireless security</p>
   <p>When prompted for your wireless security password, you can choose which type of wireless security to 
use. Make sure you choose the one that is used by the router or wireless base station. This should be 
selected by default, but sometimes it will not be for some reason. If you don't know which one it is, use 
trial and error to go through the different options.</p>
  </item>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page
index 72fffdf..f166337 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-05" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -170,7 +171,7 @@
   <p>If your wireless adapter was not recognized, it might not be working
   properly or the correct drivers may not be installed for it. How you check to
   see if there are any drivers you can install will depend on which Linux
-  distribution you are using (like Ubuntu, Fedora or openSuSE).</p>
+  distribution you are using (like Ubuntu, Arch, Fedora or openSUSE).</p>
 
   <p>To get specific help, look at the support options on your distribution's
   website. These might include mailing lists and web chats where you can ask
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
index 7517416..050294d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-05" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -46,10 +47,10 @@
     <item>
       <p>The manufacturers and model numbers of your computer, wireless adapter
       and router. This information can usually be found on the
-      underside/reverse of the device.</p>
+      underside or reverse of the device.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Any version/revision numbers that may be printed on your wireless
+      <p>Any version or revision numbers that may be printed on your wireless
       network devices or their packaging. These can be especially helpful, so
       look carefully.</p>
     </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
index b2cf753..fe1cd57 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-05" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -52,8 +53,8 @@
       <p>Click the system status area on the top bar and select
       <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>, then select <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>. Make sure that
       <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> is set to <gui>ON</gui>. You should also check that
-      <link xref="net-wireless-airplane">Airplane Mode is not switched
-      on</link>.</p>
+      <link xref="net-wireless-airplane">Airplane Mode</link> is <em>not</em>
+      switched on.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Open the Terminal, type <cmd>nmcli device</cmd> and press
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page
index 307c124..ab91744 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <link type="next" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -25,7 +26,7 @@
 
   <title>Wireless network troubleshooter</title>
 
-  <p>This is a step-by step troubleshooting guide to help you identify and fix
+  <p>This is a step-by-step troubleshooting guide to help you identify and fix
   wireless problems. If you cannot connect to a wireless network for some
   reason, try following the instructions here.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
index 1dc203d..37cdcaa 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
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