[gnome-user-docs] a11y-screen-reader updated and marked with status:review



commit 2410be7f2888540bb9c11545061f1ff783a88a8c
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 18:45:01 2015 -0400

    a11y-screen-reader updated and marked with status:review
    
    In addition, I'm reverting the changes in a11-braille by this commit.
    Also, marking a11y-right-click with status:final for 3.18

 gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page       |   21 ---------------------
 gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page   |    3 ++-
 gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page |   33 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---
 3 files changed, 32 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page
index 9cc1148..3c8cff3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-braille.page
@@ -32,27 +32,6 @@
   GNOME, you might not have Orca installed. If not, start with
   <link href="install:orca">Install Orca</link> first.</p>
 
-  <steps>
-    <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Universal Access</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Universal Access</gui> to open the panel.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Switch <gui>Screen Reader</gui> to <gui>ON</gui> in the
-      <gui>Seeing</gui> section.</p>
-    </item>
-  </steps>
-
-  <note style = "tip">
-    <title>Quickly turn Screen Reader on and off</title>
-    <p>You can turn Screen Reader on and off by clicking the
-    <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> in the top bar and
-    selecting <gui>Screen Reader</gui>.</p>
-  </note>
-
   <p>Refer to the <link href="help:orca">Orca Help</link> for
   more information.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
index 145b20f..f2bc3c5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-right-click.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-18" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -67,7 +68,7 @@
   release the mouse button to right-click.</p>
 
   <p>Some special pointers, such as the resize pointers, do not change colors.
-  You can still use simulated secondary click as normal, even if you don't get
+  You can still use simulated secondary click as normal, even if you do not get
   visual feedback from the pointer.</p>
 
   <p>If you use <link xref="mouse-mousekeys">Mouse Keys</link>, this also
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page
index ee72e54..27873f4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-screen-reader.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="a11y#vision" group="blind"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -13,6 +14,10 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Jana Heves</name>
+      <email>jsvarova gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Use the <app>Orca</app> screen reader to speak the user
     interface.</desc>
@@ -22,9 +27,31 @@
 
   <p>GNOME provides the <app>Orca</app> screen reader to speak the user
   interface. Depending on how you installed GNOME, you might not have
-  Orca installed. <link href="install:orca">Install Orca</link>, then
-  refer to the <link href="help:orca">Orca Help</link> for more
-  information.</p>
+  Orca installed. If not, <link href="install:orca">Install Orca</link> first.</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Universal Access</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Universal Access</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Switch <gui>Screen Reader</gui> to <gui>ON</gui> in the
+      <gui>Seeing</gui> section.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+  <note style = "tip">
+    <title>Quickly turn Screen Reader on and off</title>
+    <p>You can turn Screen Reader on and off by clicking the
+    <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> in the top bar and
+    selecting <gui>Screen Reader</gui>.</p>
+  </note>
+
+  <p>Refer to the <link href="help:orca">Orca Help</link> for
+  more information.</p>
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>


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