[gnome-user-docs] Finalize net-vpn-connect, net-mobile for tech rvw

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 8982f3b91aeeec775345405567b3e5602e728fdb
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 18:02:34 2015 -0400

    Finalize net-vpn-connect, net-mobile for tech rvw

 gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page      |   11 +++++++++--
 gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page |    4 ++--
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page b/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
index 7b3519c..7dd5893 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide"  xref="net-wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -31,8 +32,14 @@
     <item><p>Connect your phone or Internet stick to a USB port on your
     computer.</p></item>
 
-    <item><p>Click the system status area on the top bar, select
-    <gui>Mobile Broadband</gui>, then click <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
+  <item>
+    <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right
+    side of the top bar.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Select
+    <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-wireless-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16"/>
+      Wi-Fi Not Connected</gui>. The Wi-Fi section of the menu will expand.</p>
       <note>
         <p>If <gui>Mobile Broadband</gui> does not appear in the system
         status menu, ensure that your device is not set to connect as Mass
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
index 08fe340..83bb0aa 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-12-05" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
  instructions to get that working.</p>
 </note>
 
-<p>Once that's done, you can set up the VPN connection:</p>
+<p>To set up the VPN connection:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>