[gnome-user-docs] Send net-wireless-vpn for final review



commit 46740297ffe9abe85a36d0dcd9ab8cef31a548e0
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 17:32:12 2015 -0400

    Send net-wireless-vpn for final review

 gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page |   12 +++++++-----
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
index 6210273..558d58a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-12-05" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -78,8 +79,9 @@
       are finished.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>When you have finished setting-up the VPN, click the system status
-      area on the top bar, click <gui>VPN</gui> and select the connection you
+      <p>When you have finished setting-up the VPN, open the
+      <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right side of
+      the top bar, click <gui>VPN</gui> and select the connection you
       just created. You may need to enter a password for the connection before
       it is established. Once the connection is made, you will see a lock
       shaped icon in the top bar.</p>
@@ -87,9 +89,9 @@
     <item>
       <p>Hopefully you will successfully connect to the VPN. If not, you may
       need to double-check the VPN settings you entered. You can do this from
-      the <gui>Network</gui> panel that you used to create the connection,
-      select the VPN connection from the list, then press the button in the
-      bottom right corner of the panel.</p>
+      the <gui>Network</gui> panel that you used to create the connection.
+      Select the VPN connection from the list, then press the round settings
+      button.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>To disconnect from the VPN, click the system status area on the top


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