[gnome-user-docs] Send net-wireless-vpn for final review
- From: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Send net-wireless-vpn for final review
- Date: Mon, 28 Sep 2015 21:33:16 +0000 (UTC)
commit 46740297ffe9abe85a36d0dcd9ab8cef31a548e0
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date: Mon Sep 28 17:32:12 2015 -0400
Send net-wireless-vpn for final review
gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page | 12 +++++++-----
1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
index 6210273..558d58a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-vpn-connect.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
<revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-12-05" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -78,8 +79,9 @@
are finished.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>When you have finished setting-up the VPN, click the system status
- area on the top bar, click <gui>VPN</gui> and select the connection you
+ <p>When you have finished setting-up the VPN, open the
+ <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right side of
+ the top bar, click <gui>VPN</gui> and select the connection you
just created. You may need to enter a password for the connection before
it is established. Once the connection is made, you will see a lock
shaped icon in the top bar.</p>
@@ -87,9 +89,9 @@
<item>
<p>Hopefully you will successfully connect to the VPN. If not, you may
need to double-check the VPN settings you entered. You can do this from
- the <gui>Network</gui> panel that you used to create the connection,
- select the VPN connection from the list, then press the button in the
- bottom right corner of the panel.</p>
+ the <gui>Network</gui> panel that you used to create the connection.
+ Select the VPN connection from the list, then press the round settings
+ button.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>To disconnect from the VPN, click the system status area on the top
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