[gnome-user-docs] Update net-wireless-connect, change statuses



commit 74bcada2eeb96eecfd45bb7cd2b061d632e6849e
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 14:47:50 2015 -0400

    Update net-wireless-connect, change statuses

 gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-email.page            |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page |   66 ++++++++++++++++++++------------
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page         |    7 +++
 6 files changed, 52 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
index a96b9be..8c3180b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-antivirus.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-security"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
index fb344fe..bbed7fc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-default-email.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-10-30" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
index cb2e3a4..426b259 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-antivirus"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
index 97583d1..370c164 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>The Ubuntu Documentation Team</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
index 3785bc3..122fbe3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-12-05" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -31,28 +32,42 @@
  on the network, and so on.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click the system status area on the top bar, select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>,
- then click <gui>Select Network</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Click the name of the network you want to connect to, then click
- <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
-   <p>If the name of the network isn't in the list, try clicking <gui>More</gui>
- to see if the network is further down the list. If you still don't see the
- network, you may be out of range or the network
- <link xref="net-wireless-hidden">might be hidden</link>.</p>
+  <item>
+    <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right
+    side of the top bar.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Select
+    <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-wireless-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16">
+      Wi-Fi Not Connected</gui>. The Wi-Fi section of the menu will expand.</p>
+    <p>Click <gui>Select Network</gui>.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click the name of the network you want, then click
+    <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
+    <p>If the name of the network is not in the list, try clicking
+    <gui>More</gui> to see if the network is further down the list. If you 
+    still do not see the network, you may be out of range, or the network
+    <link xref="net-wireless-hidden">might be hidden</link>.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>If the network is protected by a password
+    (<link xref="net-wireless-wepwpa">encryption key</link>), enter the
+    password when prompted and click <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
+    <p>If you do not know the key, it may be written on the underside of the
+    wireless router or base station, in its instruction manual, or you may have
+    to ask the person who administers the wireless network.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>The network icon will change appearance as the computer attempts to
+    connect to the network.</p>
   </item>
-  <item><p>If the network is protected by a password
- (<link xref="net-wireless-wepwpa">encryption key</link>), enter the password
- when prompted and click <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
-  <p>If you do not know the key, it may be written on the underside of the
- wireless router or base station, in its instruction manual, or you may have to
- ask the person who administers the wireless network.</p></item>
-  <item><p>The network icon will change appearance as the computer attempts to
- connect to the network.</p></item>
   <item>
-   <p>If the connection is successful, the icon will change to a dot with
- several bars above it. More bars indicate a stronger connection to the
- network. If there aren't many bars, the connection is weak and might not be
- very reliable.</p>
+    <p>If the connection is successful, the icon will change to a dot with
+    several curved bars above it
+    (<media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-wireless-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16">). More bars
+    indicate a stronger connection to the network. Fewer bars mean the
+    connection is weaker and might not be very reliable.</p>
   </item>
 </steps>
 
@@ -63,10 +78,11 @@
   your computer's wireless card might have a problem, for example. See
   <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting" /> for more help.</p>
 
-<p>A stronger connection to a wireless network does not necessarily mean that
- you have a faster internet connection, or that you will have faster download
- speeds. The wireless connection connects your computer to the <em>device which
- provides the internet connection</em> (like a router or modem), but the two
- connections are actually different, and so will run at different speeds.</p>
+  <p>A stronger connection to a wireless network does not necessarily mean that
+  you have a faster internet connection, or that you will have faster download
+  speeds. The wireless connection connects your computer to the <em>device
+  which provides the internet connection</em> (like a router or modem), but the
+  two connections are actually different, and so will run at different
+  speeds.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
index ee35e1a..f9012f3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="net" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-general"/>
@@ -19,7 +20,13 @@
     <credit type="author">
       <name>The Ubuntu Documentation Team</name>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
   </info>
 
 <title>Wireless Networking</title>


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