[gnome-getting-started-docs] Edits in gs-change-date-time-timezone.page

[Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>]

commit ca1e21a9a84eec4daf8d36794e9bd834c21baa83
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Mon Sep 21 22:38:20 2015 +0200

    Edits in gs-change-date-time-timezone.page

 gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page |   24 ++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
index 3563952..b132850 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/";
       xmlns:ui="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/ui/";
       xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
-      type="topic" style="ui" id="gs-change-date-time-timezone" version="1.0 if/1.0">
+      type="topic" style="ui" id="gs-change-date-time-timezone" version="1.0">
 
   <info>
     <include href="gs-legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -22,16 +21,13 @@
 
   <title>Change the date, time and timezone</title>
 
-  <section id="change-date-time">
-    <title>Change the date, time and timezone</title>
-  
   <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg"
   src="gs-goa1.svg" width="100%" />
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
     <item><p>Press the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
-    <item><p>From the System menu select Date &amp; Time.</p></item>
+    <item><p>From the list of panels, select <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>.</p></item>
   </steps>
   
   <media its:translate="yes" type="image" mime="image/svg"
@@ -40,25 +36,21 @@
   <steps style="continues">
     <item><p>Make sure that the <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> item is switched
      off, and then click the <gui>Time Zone</gui> item below.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click on your location on the map. This selects your current city,
-     which you can also search for in the
-     search box above the map.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click the <gui>Close</gui> button to go back to the <gui>Date &amp;
-     Time Settings</gui> window.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click on your location on the world map. This selects your current
+     city, which you can also search for in the search box above the map.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Close the world map window to go back to the <gui>Date &amp;
+     Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Make sure that the <gui>Automatic Date &amp; Time</gui> item is
      switched off, and then click the <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> item below to
      open the <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> window. There you can adjust your date
      and time settings by clicking on the <gui>+</gui> or <gui>-</gui> buttons.</p>
      </item>
-    <item><p>Click the <gui>Close</gui> button to go back to the <gui>Date &amp;
-     Time Settings</gui> window, and then close that window by clicking the
-     cross at the top-right corner of that window.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Close the window to go back to the <gui>Date &amp;
+     Time Settings</gui>, and then close the panel.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <!-- FIXME: 
        - explain what time/date does - a reference in further reading?
   -->
 
-  </section>
-
 </page>