[release-notes/gnome-3-18] minor fixes to more page

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 7b9854172d0229e80df8cba089cf77e1749c424d
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Wed Sep 16 11:16:53 2015 +0100

    minor fixes to more page

 help/C/more.page |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index bd71058..876a087 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -29,16 +29,16 @@
   <section id="touchpad-gestures">
     <title>Multitouch Touchpad Gestures</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/touchpad-gestures.png"/>
-    <p>Multitouch gestures, such as pinch to zoom or rotate, were first introduced in GNOME 3.14. However, 
it has only been possible to use them with a touchscreen. Now, in &gnomeversion;, these gestures can also be 
used touchpads.</p>
-    <p>Available gestures include using two fingers to zoom or rotate in the image and document viewer 
applications. It is also possible to switch workspace using four-finger vertical drags. Additional gestures 
are planned for the future.</p>
-    <p>Note that this feature is only available under Wayland.</p>
+    <p>Multitouch gestures, such as pinch to zoom and rotate, were first introduced in GNOME 3.14. However, 
it has only been possible to use them with a touchscreen. Now, in &gnomeversion;, these gestures can also be 
used with touchpads.</p>
+    <p>Available gestures include using two fingers to zoom and rotate in the image and document viewer 
applications. It is also possible to switch workspace using four-finger vertical drags. Additional gestures 
are planned for the future.</p>
+    <p>This feature is only available under Wayland.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="polari">
     <title>A Better Polari</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Polari, GNOME’s IRC application, has had a number of refinements for &gnomeversion;. Paste service 
integration has been added, so that it is easy to share large blocks of text. To use this feature, simply 
paste the text you want to share into the chat entry box, and Polari will paste it online and send a link to 
the current channel.</p>
-    <p>Other improvements include a better first run experience, which now guides users through the process 
of creating connections, improved feedback for connection errors, and better indicators for new messages.</p>
+    <p>Other improvements include a better first run experience, which now guides you through the process of 
creating connections, improved feedback for connection errors, and better indicators for new messages.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="boxes">
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Boxes is the GNOME application for using virtual and remote machines. For &gnomeversion;, it has been 
made more powerful, with a range of improvements:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>A new list view lets you get an overview when you have a lot of boxes, and shows more details 
about each box. It is particularly suited to working with servers.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A new list view shows more details about each of your boxes, and is helpful when you have a 
lot of boxes. It is particularly suited to working with servers.</p></item>
       <item><p>It is now possible to filter the main view in order to only show remote or local 
boxes.</p></item>
       <item><p>The IP address of boxes is now shown beneath their thumbnail: this is useful for accessing 
them from the command line, or for differentiating between lots of boxes.</p></item>
       <item><p>Express installation is now available for Fedora 21 and newer.</p></item>