[release-notes/gnome-3-18] refine the more page

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit f2b54f2fba1f89d0b00b86d0f1479cb3d6342eb3
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 14 16:32:09 2015 +0100

    refine the more page

 help/C/more.page |   54 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------
 1 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index cdff114..b12668f 100644
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@@ -29,45 +29,44 @@
   <section id="touchpad-gestures">
     <title>Multitouch Touchpad Gestures</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Multitouch gestures, such as pinch to zoom, or four-finger drag, were first introduced in GNOME 3.14. 
However, this was for touchscreens only. Now, in &gnomeversion;, these gestures can also be used touchpads. 
Initial gestures include pinch to zoom and rotate in Evince and Eye of GNOME, and four-finger swipe to switch 
workspace. Additional gestures are planned for the future.</p>
+    <p>Multitouch gestures, such as pinch to zoom or rotate, were first introduced in GNOME 3.14. However, 
it has only been possible to use them with a touchscreen. Now, in &gnomeversion;, these gestures can also be 
used touchpads.</p>
+    <p>Possible gestures include using two fingers to zoom or rotate in the image and document viewer 
applications. It is also possible to switch workspace using four-finger vertical drags. Additional gestures 
are planned for the future.</p>
     <p>Note that this feature is only available under Wayland.</p>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="touch-screen-improvements">
-    <title>Touch Screen Improvements</title>
+  <section id="touch-improvements">
+    <title>Touch Improvements</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>The ability to select, cut, copy and paste text using a touchscreen has been dramatically improved in 
&gnomeversion;. The handles used to adjust text selections have been made bigger and their look has been 
improved. New popovers provide convenient access to actions, like cut, copy and paste. Behavior has been 
improved, too: now, a single tap selects a word, and a second tap shows the actions popover.</p>
+    <p>The ability to select, cut, copy and paste text using a touchscreen has been dramatically improved in 
&gnomeversion;. The handles used to adjust text selections have been made bigger and their look has been 
improved, and new popovers provide convenient access to actions, like cut, copy and paste. The overall 
behavior of interacting with text has been improved, too.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="polari">
     <title>A Better Polari</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Polari, GNOME’s IRC application, has had a number of refinements for &gnomeversion;. Paste service 
integration has been added, so that it is easy to share large blocks of text. Simply paste the text you want 
to share into the chat entry box, and Polari will paste it online and send a link to the channel.</p>
-    <p>Other improvements include a better first run experience, which now guides users through the process 
of creating connections, improved feedback for connection errors, as well as many bug fixes and visual 
enhancements.</p>
+    <p>Polari, GNOME’s IRC application, has had a number of refinements for &gnomeversion;. Paste service 
integration has been added, so that it is easy to share large blocks of text. To use this feature, simply 
paste the text you want to share into the chat entry box, and Polari will paste it online and send a link to 
the current channel.</p>
+    <p>Other improvements include a better first run experience, which now guides users through the process 
of creating connections and improved feedback for connection errors, as well as many bug fixes and visual 
enhancements.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="scrolling">
     <title>Refined Scrolling</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Scrolling has been a particular area of work in &gnomeversion;. If kinetic scrolling (where scroll 
movement has inertia, and feels physical) has not worked with your touchpad recently, this has now been 
resolved (thanks to kinetic scrolling now being handled by GTK+ itself).</p>
-    <p>Controls for scrollbars have also been updated for &gnomeversion;:</p>
-    <list>
-      <item><p>Clicking the scrollbar with the primary button (this is the left button by default) jumps to 
that location.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Holding <key>Shift</key> and clicking with the primary button jumps towards the location, one 
page at a time.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Pressing scrollbar with the secondary mouse button gradually scrolls the view in that 
direction.</p></item>
-    </list>
+    <p>Scrolling has been a particular focus for &gnomeversion;. If kinetic scrolling (where scroll movement 
has inertia, and feels physical) has not worked with your touchpad recently, this issue has now been resolved 
(thanks to kinetic scrolling now being handled by GTK+ itself).</p>
+    <p>A new auto-scroll feature has been added, which gradually scrolls the view in one direction. To 
activate this, press the scrollbar with the secondary mouse or touchpad button (this is the right button by 
default).</p>
+    <p>Scrolling by one page at a time is still supported. To do this, hold the <key>Shift</key> and 
clicking with the primary button jumps towards the location, one page at a time.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="boxes">
     <title>More Powerful Boxes</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Boxes is the GNOME application for using virtual and remote machines. For &gnomeversion;, it has been 
made more powerful.</p>
+    <p>Boxes is the GNOME application for using virtual and remote machines. For &gnomeversion;, it has been 
made more powerful, with a range of improvements:</p>
     <list>
       <item><p>A new list view lets you get an overview when you have a lot of boxes, and is particularly 
suited to working with servers.</p></item>
       <item><p>It is now possible to filter the main view of boxes, to only show either remote or 
local.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The address or hostname of remote boxes is now shown below their thumbnail.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The IP address of boxes is now shown below their thumbnail: useful for accessing them from 
the command line, or for diffentiating between lots of boxes.</p></item>
       <item><p>Express installation is now available for Fedora 21 and newer.</p></item>
       <item><p>Force shutdown and restart actions are now easier to access.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Normally, boxes are automatically paused when they aren't in use. A new option makes it 
possible to force a box to always run, even when it isn't in use. This is particularly useful if the box is a 
server.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Express installation is now supported for Fedora 21 and newer.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
 
@@ -80,21 +79,22 @@
 
   <section id="more">
     <title>Smaller Things</title>
-    <p>There are many other smaller improvements in GNOME &gnomeversion;. These include:</p>
+    <p>As usual, there are many other smaller improvements in this GNOME release. Here are some of them:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>GNOME Shell refinements (improved system status menu, restyled dialog windows).</p></item>
-      <item><p>Logs improvements (better layout, select which boot to view).</p></item>
-      <item><p>Control center — improved Bluetooth settings.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Smooth spinners.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Documents — improved collections dialog.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Evince — improved annotations in Evince, including the introduction of highlight annotations, 
an improved interface, and the ability to move annotations.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Web’s PDF viewer now allows search.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The screen will not automatically lock when watching fullscreen videos with Web.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Improved performance in Web.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Maps now is now able to indicate your direction as well as location, and it is possible to 
enter latitude/longitude coordinates or a geoURI.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The system status menu (accessed from the top right corner of the screen) has been refined. 
With a simpler organization, it is smaller and easier to read.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The layout of the Logs application has been improved, to be more efficient and easier to 
read. It is also possible to select which boot to view.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Web, the GNOME browser, has got faster.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Bluetooth sharing settings have been merged into the main Bluetooth settings, to make the 
function easier to find. Various other improvements have been made to the Bluetooth settings, including 
handling airplane mode better, and giving better feedback when no bluetooth device is available.</p></item>
+      <item><p>With &gnomeversion;, the screen will not automatically lock when you are watching fullscreen 
videos with Web.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The animation on progress spinners has been made super smooth.</p></item>
+      <item><p>In the Documents application, the collections dialog has been greatly improved.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Annotations have received a number of important improvementsn in Evince, the document viewer: 
highlight annotations have been introduced, annotations can now be moved, and the general annotations 
interface has been refined.</p></item>
+      <item><p>System modal dialogs have been restyled, so that they match the other dialog windows in 
GNOME.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Web’s built-in PDF viewer now has a search function.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Maps now is now able to indicate your direction as well as location. It is also possible to 
enter latitude/longitude coordinates or a geoURI.</p></item>
     </list>
 
-  <p>And, of course, &gnomeversion; includes lots of important bug fixes.</p>
+  <p>There are many other improvements in &gnomeversion;, including bug fixes and other minor 
improvements.</p>
 
   </section>