[release-notes/gnome-3-16] work up the more page

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 91908b166014c102903cc93feb6723e9418da867
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 10 19:38:16 2015 +0000

    work up the more page

 help/C/more.page |   59 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
 1 files changed, 34 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/more.page b/help/C/more.page
index 7277a8a..5b3bbcd 100644
--- a/help/C/more.page
+++ b/help/C/more.page
@@ -26,28 +26,31 @@
 
   <p>The latest GNOME release includes many other new features and improvements.</p>
 
-  <section id="calculator">
-    <title>Calculator</title>
-    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME's <app>Calculator</app> has a new history view for &gnomeversion;. This makes it possible to 
easily string several calculations together, as well as to reuse the figures from previous calculations. The 
<app>Calculator</app> now also includes a simplified keyboard only mode, for cases when buttons aren't 
needed.</p>
-  </section>
-
   <section id="box">
-    <title>Boxes</title>
+    <title>Better Boxes</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Reworked the properties interface - new dialog, reorganised. Settings have been made clearer and 
easier to understand.</p>
-    <p>Reworked box creation assistant. Removed cruft, better headings, added URL completion.</p>
-    <p>Context menu in boxes overview. This menu is also accessible from the header bar when viewing a 
box.</p>
-    <p>Feedback when screen resolution changes.</p>
-    <p>New menu for sending keyboard shortcuts to a box.</p>
-    <p>Automatically pauses boxes that aren't being viewed - prevents unnecessary resource usage.</p>
-    <p>Box display is always scaled.</p>
-    <p>Pretty welcome screen.</p>
+    <p><app>Boxes</app>, the application for virtual and remote machines, has had a large number of user 
interface fixes for &gnomeversion;:</p>
+    <list>
+      <item><p>Box properties have been reorganised and refined, so they are easier to find and 
understand.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The box creation assistant has been improved, with clearer navigation, URL completion, and 
general cleanups.</p></item>
+      <item><p>It is now possible to quickly act on individual boxes, with context menus in the box 
overview, and matching header bar menus when viewing a box.</p></item>
+      <item><p>A new menu makes it possible to send keyboard shortcuts that cannot be entered directly into 
a box, such as <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq> and 
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>F3</key></keyseq>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Boxes are now automatically paused when they aren't being viewed. This prevents unnecessary 
resource usage.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Display handling has been improved. The display of boxes are now always automatically scaled, 
and an on screen display indicates resolution changes.</p></item>
+    </list>
   </section>
 
   <section id="maps">
-    <title>Improved Maps, now with Four Square</title>
+    <title>Improved Maps, now with Foursquare</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <p><app>Maps</app> has had a number of improvements for &gnomeversion;. Information bubbles have been 
added for search results and favorite locations. These show useful information about places, such as their 
address, wheelchair accessibility, and links to <link href="http://www.wikipedia.org/";>Wikipedia</link> 
articles. The new information bubbles also allow locations to be used as the start and end points for travel 
directions, for sending a location to the <app>Weather</app> and <app>Clocks</app> applications, and for 
marking favorite places.</p>
+    <p>Other new features and improvements in <app>Maps</app> include:</p>
+    <list>
+      <item><p>It is now possible to check into <link href="https://foursquare.com/";>Foursquare</link> 
directly from <app>Maps</app>. To use this feature, add your Foursquare account to <app>Online 
Accounts</app>, and select the current location marker from <app>Maps</app>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>If contacts have addresses, you can search for contacts directly from <app>Maps</app>, if 
they have address information.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Maps</app> can now gracefully handle when there is no network connection, or when 
location services are turned off.</p></item>
+      <item><p>It is now possible to adjust routes by dragging them on the map.</p></item>
+    </list>
   </section>
 
   <section id="games">
@@ -56,19 +59,25 @@
     <p>With &gnomeversion;, GNOME's games have had another update. This release includes a fun new sliding 
blocks game, called <app>Taquin</app>. <app>Iagno</app> has also had a number of improvements, including a 
new dialog for starting games and additional themes.</p>
   </section>
 
+  <section id="calculator">
+    <title>Calculator History</title>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <p>GNOME's <app>Calculator</app> has a new history view for &gnomeversion;. This makes it possible to 
view previous calculations, and you can quickly copy figures that you have used before. Together, this makes 
performing sequences of calculations much easier. The <app>Calculator</app> now also includes a simplified 
keyboard only mode, for cases when buttons aren't needed.</p>
+  </section>
+
   <section id="more">
-    <title>Even More</title>
+    <title>Smaller Things</title>
     <p>There are many other smaller improvements in GNOME &gnomeversion;. These include:</p>
 
     <list>
-      <item><p>Evince has a nicer sidebar.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Major perormance improvements for Photos.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Documents has a view switcher.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Music has smart playlists.</p></item>
-      <item><p>File chooser search.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Privacy controls in initial setup, problem reporting settings in the control 
center.</p></item>
-      <item><p>geocode-glib now uses https, gnome terminal encrypts scrollback.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Better codec installation experience.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The GNOME <app>Document Viewer</app> has a nicer sidebar.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Major performance improvements have been made to <app>Photos</app>.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Documents</app> now shows different views for recent documents and 
collections.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Smart playlists have been added to <app>Music</app>, so you can view freqently played and 
recently added tracks. It is now also possible to star your favorite tracks.</p></item> <!-- Music has also 
got faster. Should it be turned into a bigger section? -->
+      <item><p>Search has been added to the system file chooser dialog.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Problem reporting controls have been added to <app>Settings</app>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The initial setup assistant now includes a section on privacy controls. Privacy has also been 
improved for geolocation (thanks to the use of https) and the <app>Terminal</app> (as scrollback is now 
encrypted).</p></item>
+      <item><p>In <app>Contacts</app>, small maps are now shown for addresses. These provide a handy link 
through to <app>Maps</app>, where you can see the location in more detail.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>