[release-notes/gnome-3-16] work up the main page

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit a276c98767402a8a42e3d15b892b3f521ee7f837
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 10 16:53:26 2015 +0000

    work up the main page

 help/C/index.page |   24 ++++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index bcb666a..3e64bc0 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -27,27 +27,28 @@
   <title>Welcome to GNOME &gnomeversion;</title>
 
   <section id="notifications">
-    <title>New Notifications Design</title>
+    <title>Notifications Reimagined</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>GNOME 3's notifications system has been overhauled for &gnomeversion;. A new message list provides a 
straightforward overview of previous notifications. The redesigned date and time menu also shows event 
reminders and world times, through integration with the <app>Clocks</app> application. The addition of 
weather information and birthday reminders is planned for the future.</p>
-    <p>Popup notification banners have been repositioned as a part of the redesign, so that they appear 
towards the top of the screen. This makes them more noticable, and prevents them from interfering with text 
input at the bottom of the screen. As with the previous notifications design, actions can be taken on popup 
banners, including making chat replies.</p>
+    <p>GNOME 3's notifications system has been overhauled for &gnomeversion;. A new message list provides 
straightforward access to previous notifications, and popup notification banners have been repositioned in 
order to make them more noticable and to prevent them from interfering with applications. As with the 
previous notifications design, actions can be taken on popup banners, including making chat replies.</p>
+    <p>The date and time drop down has also been redesigned for &gnomeversion;. Not only does it include 
previous notifications, but the new drop down also shows event reminders and world times. This gives a great 
overview of what is currently happening, as well as what is scheduled for the day. The addition of weather 
information and birthday reminders is planned for the future.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="files">
-    <title>Files</title>
+    <title>Files Improvements</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>The <app>Files</app> application has had a number of significant updates for &gnomeversion;. The grid 
and list views have been overhauled, so that they provide bigger thumbnails, easier to read rows, and a more 
attractive appearance. They are complemented by a new view popover.</p>
-    <p>Deletion has also been improved for &gnomeversion;, with the addition of a new, easy to discover undo 
feature. This allows files and folders to be moved to the trash using <key>Delete</key>, rather than the 
existing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq> keyboard combination.</p>
+    <p>The <app>Files</app> application has had a number of significant updates for &gnomeversion;. The grid 
and list views have been improved, so that they provide bigger thumbnails, easier to read rows, and have a 
more attractive appearance. They are complemented by a new popover for controlling the view, which makes it 
easy to change the zoom level and sort order from a single place.</p>
+    <p>File deletion has also been improved for &gnomeversion;, with the addition of a new, easy to discover 
undo feature. This allows files and folders to be moved to the trash using <key>Delete</key>, rather than the 
previous <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Delete</key></keyseq> keyboard combination.</p>
+    <p>Finally, many of the menus in <app>Files</app> have been updated for consistency and logical 
organization.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="overlay-scollbars">
-    <title>Overlay Scollbars</title>
+    <title>New Look Scollbars</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>&gnomeversion; introduces a new style of scrollbar for GNOME 3. Instead of being shown all the time, 
these are only shown when needed, creating a cleaner, less distracting view, which helps you to focus on 
window content.</p>
+    <p>&gnomeversion; introduces a new style of scrollbar for GNOME 3. Instead of being shown all the time, 
the new overlay scrollbars are only shown when needed: a small scroll indicator is shown when the pointer is 
moved, and a larger bar appears when control is wanted. This creates a cleaner, less distracting view, which 
helps you to focus on window content.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="image-viewer">
-    <title>Image Viewer</title>
+    <title>Updated Image Viewer</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>GNOME's <app>Image Viewer</app> application has been redesigned for this release. The new design 
significantly reduces the amount of window chrome, to give more space to the images themselves. A new zoom 
control provides a quick way to conveniently zoom in and out, and the properties sidebar has been refined to 
provide a more elegant overview.</p>
   </section>
@@ -55,7 +56,10 @@
   <section id="new-apps">
     <title>New Preview Applications</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p>Calendar, Characters, Books.</p>
+    <p>GNOME &gnomeversion; introduces three new preview applications. These are initial versions that are 
intended for testing, and to give a taste of what is to come in future versions.</p>
+    <p>The new <app>Calendar</app> application provides an elegant and simple interface to your online 
schedule, and is integrated with <app>Online Accounts</app> for seamless setup.</p>
+    <p><app>Characters</app> is a new character map application. Common characters are quick and easy to 
browse, thanks to category-based browsing, which is accompanied by fully integrated search. A recent view 
lets you quickly find characters that you have used in the past.</p>
+    <p>Finally, <app>Books</app> is a new ebook viewer application for GNOME. The initial version allows 
viewing comic book archives; work on ePub support is ongoing.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="more">