[gnome-user-docs] Various edits in gnome-help



commit 6f9433a4f8e1cd7af42410b7449d9052cf7c7dc3
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Thu Jun 18 19:23:43 2015 +0200

    Various edits in gnome-help
    
    Thanks to Marek Cernocky for reporting these.

 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page                        |    7 +++++--
 gnome-help/C/files-open.page                       |    5 +----
 gnome-help/C/files-recover.page                    |    4 +---
 gnome-help/C/look-background.page                  |    5 +++--
 ...net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page |   13 ++++++-------
 5 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index a4902a3..e813231 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -30,8 +30,11 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date
-      &amp; Time Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> to open the control center.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you have a standard account, you will need to click
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-open.page b/gnome-help/C/files-open.page
index 4425acc..d4d0ed3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-open.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-open.page
@@ -56,10 +56,7 @@ that are known to handle files of that type.</p>
     <item><p>Right-click the file and select <gui>Properties</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select the <gui>Open With</gui> tab.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select the application you want and click
-    <gui>Set as default</gui>.  By default, the file manager only shows
-    applications it knows can handle the file. To look through all the
-    applications on your computer, click <gui>Show
-    other applications</gui>.</p>
+    <gui>Set as default</gui>.</p>
     <p>If <gui>Other Applications</gui> contains an application you sometimes
     want to use, but do not want to make the default, select that application
     and click <gui>Add</gui>. This will add it to <gui>Recommended
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
index 2fde8b4..efa0d4f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-recover.page
@@ -34,9 +34,7 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Trash</gui> in the sidebar. If you do not see the sidebar,
-      click the
-      <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" src="figures/go-down.png"><span its:translate="yes">View 
options</span></media></gui>
-      button in the toolbar and pick <gui>Show Sidebar</gui></p>
+      click <gui>Files</gui> in the top bar and pick <gui>Sidebar</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If your deleted file is there, click on it and select
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
index 2fe69f2..bc2ec80 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-background.page
@@ -80,8 +80,9 @@
           store photos there. If you would like to use an image that is not in
           your Pictures folder, either use <app>Files</app> by right-clicking
           on the image file and selecting <gui>Set as Wallpaper</gui>, or
-          <app>Image Viewer</app> by opening the image file and selecting
-          <guiseq><gui>Image</gui><gui>Set as Desktop Background</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+          <app>Image Viewer</app> by opening the image file, clicking the
+          menu button in the titlebar and selecting <gui>Set as
+          Wallpaper</gui>.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <p>Select <gui>Colors</gui> to just use a flat color.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
index b7a1497..b2cf753 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
@@ -56,14 +56,13 @@
       on</link>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the Terminal, type <cmd>nm-tool</cmd> and press
+      <p>Open the Terminal, type <cmd>nmcli device</cmd> and press
       <key>Enter</key>.</p>
-      <p>This will display information about your network hardware and
+      <p>This will display information about your network interfaces and
       connection status. Look down the list of information and see if there is
-      a section related to the wireless network adapter. The information for
-      each network device is separated by a row of dashes. If you find the line
-      <code>State: Connected</code> in the section for your wireless adapter,
-      it means that it is working and connected to your wireless router.</p>
+      an item related to the wireless network adapter. If the state is
+      <code>connected</code>, it means that the adapter is working and connected
+      to your wireless router.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -73,7 +72,7 @@
   your router and ISP setup guides to make sure the settings are correct, or
   contact your ISP for support.</p>
 
-  <p>If the information from <cmd>nm-tool</cmd> did not indicate that you were
+  <p>If the information from <cmd>nmcli device</cmd> did not indicate that you were
   connected to the network, click <gui>Next</gui> to proceed to the next
   portion of the troubleshooting guide.</p>
 


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