[gnome-software] offline updates: Error messages reworded

[Matthias Clasen <matthiasc src gnome org>]

commit c8a6bf1f0d7efa0af0c21a20375f5684b22f22fb
Author: Rafal Luzynski <digitalfreak lingonborough com>
Date:   Fri Jun 12 11:41:33 2015 +0200

    offline updates: Error messages reworded
    
    This should make the error messages less scary, verbose, and technical.
    All suggestions by Allan Day.
    
    https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=748936#c10

 src/gs-offline-updates.c |   20 +++++++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/src/gs-offline-updates.c b/src/gs-offline-updates.c
index 712eb1a..6be4840 100644
--- a/src/gs-offline-updates.c
+++ b/src/gs-offline-updates.c
@@ -54,7 +54,8 @@ prepare_secondary_text (PkError *pk_error)
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_CANNOT_FETCH_SOURCES:
                /* TRANSLATORS: the package manager needed to download
                 * something with no network available */
-               return _("Network access was required but not available.");
+               return _("Internet access was required but wasn’t available. "
+                        "Please make sure that you have internet access and try again.");
                break;
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_BAD_GPG_SIGNATURE:
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_CANNOT_UPDATE_REPO_UNSIGNED:
@@ -63,7 +64,8 @@ prepare_secondary_text (PkError *pk_error)
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_PACKAGE_CORRUPT:
                /* TRANSLATORS: if the package is not signed correctly
                 *  */
-               return _("An update was not signed in the correct way.");
+               return _("There were security issues with the update. "
+                        "Please consult your software provider for more details.");
                break;
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_DEP_RESOLUTION_FAILED:
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_FILE_CONFLICTS:
@@ -72,7 +74,8 @@ prepare_secondary_text (PkError *pk_error)
                /* TRANSLATORS: the transaction failed in a way the user
                 * probably cannot comprehend. Package management systems
                 * really are teh suck.*/
-               return _("The update could not be completed.");
+               return _("The update couldn’t be installed; this is often a problem with the update itself. "
+                        "Please wait for another update and try again.");
                break;
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_TRANSACTION_CANCELLED:
                /* TRANSLATORS: the user aborted the update manually */
@@ -82,11 +85,11 @@ prepare_secondary_text (PkError *pk_error)
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_UPDATE_NOT_FOUND:
                /* TRANSLATORS: the user must have updated manually after
                 * the updates were prepared */
-               return _("An offline update was requested but no packages required updating.");
+               return _("The system was already up to date.");
                break;
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_NO_SPACE_ON_DEVICE:
                /* TRANSLATORS: we ran out of disk space */
-               return _("No space was left on the drive.");
+               return _("There wasn’t enough disk space. Please free up some space and try again.");
                break;
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_PACKAGE_FAILED_TO_BUILD:
        case PK_ERROR_ENUM_PACKAGE_FAILED_TO_INSTALL:
@@ -94,11 +97,14 @@ prepare_secondary_text (PkError *pk_error)
                /* TRANSLATORS: the update process failed in a general
                 * way, usually this message will come from source distros
                 * like gentoo */
-               return _("An update failed to install correctly.");
+               return _("The update couldn’t be installed; this is often a problem with the update itself. "
+                        "Please wait for another update and try again.");
                break;
        default:
                /* TRANSLATORS: We didn't handle the error type */
-               return _("The offline update failed in an unexpected way.");
+               return _("We’re sorry: the update failed to install. "
+                        "Please wait for another update and try again. "
+                        "If the problem persists, contact your software provider.");
                break;
        }
 }