[tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 25/25] help: tidy the pages



commit b5c1d35b157d60bb4275a2e00f3fa051017a56ec
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Tue Jan 27 10:33:30 2015 +0000

    help: tidy the pages

 help/C/game-settings.page      |   26 ++++++++++++++---------
 help/C/index.page              |   29 +++++++++++--------------
 help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page |    7 +++++-
 help/C/legal.xml               |    9 +++++--
 help/C/scores.page             |   29 ++++++++++++++++----------
 help/C/settings.page           |   39 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------
 help/C/start-game.page         |   44 ++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
 7 files changed, 110 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/game-settings.page b/help/C/game-settings.page
index 144a2ee..1a51e11 100644
--- a/help/C/game-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/game-settings.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic"
       id="game-settings">
 
@@ -9,7 +10,7 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
-      <email>aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
 
@@ -23,13 +24,18 @@
 
   <p>The <gui>Regular</gui> version is the default game, to switch over to
   another game:</p>
-    <steps>
-      <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Select the desired version of the game from
-      <gui>Game Type</gui>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Now, you may <link xref="start-game">Start a new game</link>.
-      </p></item>
-    </steps>
-</page>
 
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the desired version of the game from <gui>Game Type</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Now, you may <link xref="start-game">Start a new game</link>.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+</page>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 4bd8955..64b6309 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -1,36 +1,33 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-  xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
-  id="index"
-  type="guide"
-  style="2column">
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
+      type="guide" style="2column"
+      id="index">
 
   <info>
-    <title type="link" role="trail"><media type="image" its:translate="no"
-    src="media/logo.png"/></title>
+    <title type="link" role="trail"><media type="image" its:translate="no" src="media/logo.png"/></title>
     <title type="link">Tali</title>
     <title type="text">Tali</title>
-    <desc>Tali help.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-06-10" status="draft"/>
-  <section id="move-block">
-    <title>Move a block</title>
-    <p>Click and drag the desired block to a location of your choice on the
-    board.</p>
-  </section>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
-      <email>aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
+    <desc>Tali help.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title><media type="image" its:translate="no" src="media/logo32.png">
-  Tali logo</media> Tali</title>
+  <title>
+    <media type="image" its:translate="no" src="media/logo32.png" />
+    Tali
+  </title>
+
   <p><app>Tali</app> is similar to poker with dice. You roll five dice three
   times and try to create the best hand.</p>
 
- <section id="play" style="2column">
+  <section id="play" style="2column">
     <title>Playing Tali</title>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page b/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
index 15346f5..9c5324b 100644
--- a/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
+++ b/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
@@ -1,13 +1,15 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="keyboard-shortcuts">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tips" />
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-06-09" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
-      <email>aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
 
@@ -18,7 +20,9 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Keyboard shortcuts</title>
+
   <p>You can play <app>tali</app> using the keyboard keys as well.</p>
+
   <table frame="all" rules="cols" shade="rows">
     <tr>
       <td><p>Choose the dice to roll.</p></td>
@@ -42,4 +46,5 @@
       <td><p>Press <key>Enter</key> or <key>spacebar</key>.</p></td>
     </tr>
   </table>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/legal.xml b/help/C/legal.xml
index 9050059..aa36246 100644
--- a/help/C/legal.xml
+++ b/help/C/legal.xml
@@ -1,5 +1,8 @@
-<license xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";>
+<license xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+         href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/";>
 
-<p>This work is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. To view a 
copy of this license, visit <link 
xref="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/";>http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/</link> 
or send a letter to Creative Commons, 444 Castro Street, Suite 900, Mountain View, California, 94041, USA.</p>
-</license>
+  <p>This work is licensed under a
+  <link href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/";>Creative Commons
+  Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License</link>.</p>
 
+</license>
diff --git a/help/C/scores.page b/help/C/scores.page
index 15915ad..e6db4f4 100644
--- a/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/help/C/scores.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic"
       id="scores">
 
@@ -8,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
-      <email>aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
 
@@ -21,17 +22,24 @@
   <title>Scores</title>
 
   <p>You can check out your scores of the games played so far:</p>
-    <steps>
-      <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The <gui>Regular</gui> version is displayed by default, to view
-      scores obtained in <gui>Colors</gui>, select it from the drop down menu.
-      </p></item>
-    </steps>
 
-  <section id="score-slots">
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The <gui>Regular</gui> version is displayed by default, to view
+      scores obtained in <gui>Colors</gui>, select it from the drop down
+      menu.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+<section id="score-slots">
   <title>Score slots</title>
+
   <p>You can choose a score slot from the seven available score slots:</p>
+
   <terms>
     <item>
       <title><gui>3 of a Kind</gui></title>
@@ -68,7 +76,6 @@
       the score is 50 plus the total of all the dice.</p>
     </item>
   </terms>
-  </section>
+</section>
 
 </page>
-
diff --git a/help/C/settings.page b/help/C/settings.page
index db6e718..f790ca7 100644
--- a/help/C/settings.page
+++ b/help/C/settings.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic"
       id="settings">
 
@@ -8,7 +9,7 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
-      <email>aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
 
@@ -22,22 +23,30 @@
 
   <p>You can change the number of <gui>Human Players</gui> and <gui>Computer
   Opponents</gui>.</p>
+
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
-    <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>You can increase or decrease the number of <gui>Human
-    Players</gui> from <gui>Number of players</gui>. The maximum number of
-    players can be six. You can change their names as well from
-    <gui>Player Names</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>You can change the number of <gui>Computer Opponents</gui> from
-    <gui>Number of opponents</gui> and set the difficulty level of the opponent
-    from the drop down menu next to <gui>Difficulty</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>You can increase or decrease the number of <gui>Human Players</gui>
+      from <gui>Number of players</gui>. The maximum number of players can be
+      six. You can change their names as well from <gui>Player Names</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>You can change the number of <gui>Computer Opponents</gui> from
+      <gui>Number of opponents</gui> and set the difficulty level of the
+      opponent from the drop down menu next to <gui>Difficulty</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <section id="enable-delay-between-rolls">
-    <title>Enable delay between the rolls</title>
-    <p>You can enable the delay between the rolls by checking the
-    <gui style="checkbox">Delay between rolls</gui>.</p>
-  </section>
+<section id="enable-delay-between-rolls">
+  <title>Enable delay between the rolls</title>
+
+  <p>You can enable the delay between the rolls by checking the
+  <gui style="checkbox">Delay between rolls</gui>.</p>
+
+</section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/start-game.page b/help/C/start-game.page
index 5c97294..182bce0 100644
--- a/help/C/start-game.page
+++ b/help/C/start-game.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic"
       id="start-game">
 
@@ -12,7 +13,7 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
-      <email>aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
 
@@ -26,26 +27,34 @@
 
   <p>You can start a new game anytime in between the game. To start a new
   game:</p>
-    <steps>
-      <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">New Game</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-    </steps>
 
-  <section id="play">
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">New Game</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+<section id="play">
   <title>Play <app>Tali</app></title>
-  <p>You have to roll the five dice three times and try to create a best
-  hand. When the game starts, you see the results of the first throw of the
-  dice.</p>
+
+  <p>You have to roll the five dice three times and try to create a best hand.
+  When the game starts, you see the results of the first throw of the dice.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click on the dice you wish to roll. You can select all the dice to
-    roll in the second or third roll by clicking <gui>Roll all!</gui>.</p>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on the dice you wish to roll. You can select all the dice to
+      roll in the second or third roll by clicking <gui>Roll all!</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Roll!</gui> to roll the selected dice.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>When you have a hand you like or have run out of chances to throw
+      the dice, click on a row corresponding to what you think is your best
+      scoring combination. It is possible to have a score of zero and if you
+      click on the wrong row, you will be scored accordingly.</p>
     </item>
-    <item><p>Click on <gui>Roll!</gui> to roll the selected dice.</p></item>
-    <item><p>When you have a hand you like or have run out of chances to throw
-    the dice, click on a row corresponding to what you think is your best
-    scoring combination. It is possible to have a score of zero and if you
-    click on the wrong row, you will be scored accordingly.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="important">
@@ -60,5 +69,6 @@
     <p>There is a bonus of 35 points if you score a total of 63 points or more
     in the top six rows.</p>
   </note>
-  </section>
+</section>
+
 </page>


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