[tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 20/25] help: rephrased steps in game-settings.page



commit 1bf0b82d6166ef90ff47001be4ab63a624902939
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jul 16 17:27:41 2014 +0530

    help: rephrased steps in game-settings.page
    
    Correct link to start a new game

 help/C/game-settings.page |   10 ++++------
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/game-settings.page b/help/C/game-settings.page
index c901b4a..8a35b66 100644
--- a/help/C/game-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/game-settings.page
@@ -26,12 +26,10 @@
     <steps>
       <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>You can select the game version you want to play from the drop
-      down menu next to <gui>Game Type</gui>.</p></item>
-      <!-- Not digging the language, avoid "You can blah blah", just start with "Select the desired version 
of the game from <gui>..." -->
-      <item><p>To start playing the newly selected version of the game, you
-      need to <link xref="play-game">Start a new game</link>.</p></item>
-      <!-- language, language! Just say "Now, you may <link> Start a new.. " -->
+      <item><p>Select the desired version of the game from
+      <gui>Game Type</gui>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Now, you may <link xref="start-game">Start a new game</link>.
+      </p></item>
     </steps>
 </page>
 


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