[tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 3/25] help: reworded description in game-settings.page



commit dae2622fe292b34d42127e59d7aec3e4d5d2fd60
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jul 9 18:27:03 2014 +0530

    help: reworded description in game-settings.page

 help/C/game-settings.page |   22 ++++++++++------------
 help/Makefile.am          |   18 +++---------------
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/game-settings.page b/help/C/game-settings.page
index 9092b41..2a83484 100644
--- a/help/C/game-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/game-settings.page
@@ -1,9 +1,10 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
-      id="game-setting">
+      id="game-settings">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="settings"/>
     <revision version="3.12" date="2014-06-17" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
@@ -14,24 +15,21 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
 
+    <desc>Switch to another game version.</desc>
+
   </info>
 
   <title>Game settings</title>
 
-  <p>You can play the regular version of the game which is similar to Yahtzee
-  or the game with colors, similar to Kismet. To switch over to another version
-  of the game:</p> 
-  <!-- check for trailing spaces -->
-  <!--The first sentence must be reworded to say "blah blah is the default game, to switch over to another 
gamae:" -->
-  <!-- Why is this in list!!! argh...rewrite using steps! -->
-    <list>
+  <p>The <gui>Regular</gui> version is the default game, to switch over to
+  another game:</p>
+    <steps>
       <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq> from the application
-      menu.</p></item>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
       <item><p>You can select the game version you want to play from the drop
       down menu next to <gui>Game Type</gui>.</p></item>
       <item><p>To start playing the newly selected version of the game, you
-      need to <link xref="start-game">Start a new game</link>.</p></item>
-    </list>
+      need to <link xref="play-game">Start a new game</link>.</p></item>
+    </steps>
 </page>
 
diff --git a/help/Makefile.am b/help/Makefile.am
index 947cd0f..0c37293 100644
--- a/help/Makefile.am
+++ b/help/Makefile.am
@@ -6,25 +6,13 @@ HELP_MEDIA = \
        figures/logo.png
 
 HELP_FILES = \
+        legal.xml \
        index.page \
-       start-game.page \
        play-game.page \
-       score-slot.page \
-       players-setting.page \
+       setting.page \
        game-settings.page \
        scores.page \
-       keyboard-shortcuts.page \
-
-HELP_FILES = \
-       index.page \
-       start-game.page \
-       play-game.page \
-       score-slot.page \
-       players-setting.page \
-       game-settings.page \
-       scores.page \
-       keyboard-shortcuts.page \
-       legal.xml
+       keyboard-shortcuts.page
 
 HELP_LINGUAS =
 


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