[tali/wip/mallard-help-merge: 37/49] help: rephrased the 2nd step



commit 156a265ac23b0a11d3292830a35131c3c1c42fbf
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jul 16 16:29:56 2014 +0530

    help: rephrased the 2nd step

 help/C/scores.page |    7 +++----
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/scores.page b/help/C/scores.page
index ff28b89..5491fdf 100644
--- a/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/help/C/scores.page
@@ -24,10 +24,9 @@
     <steps>
       <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Tali</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Scores</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
-      <item><p> The dialog will display the <gui>Regular</gui> version by
-      default, to view scores obtained in <gui>Colors</gui>, select it from the
-      drop down menu at the top of the dialog.</p></item>
-      <!-- whats with you describing the UI! the gui tag is to markup the UI visually so dont say things 
like "dialog" or point out where in the UI it is like "bottom left" and stuff. rewrite this sentence -->
+      <item><p>The <gui>Regular</gui> version is displayed by default, to view
+      scores obtained in <gui>Colors</gui>, select it from the drop down menu.
+      </p></item>
     </steps>
 
   <section id="score-slots">


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