[gnome-photos] docs: updated view-photos.page. Address bug 711505

[Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>]

commit 6cc0b6014cc460f464c411dd0f3ccf0b5b4a4320
Author: Jim Campbell <jcampbell gnome org>
Date:   Mon Jan 26 15:54:41 2015 +0000

    docs: updated view-photos.page. Address bug 711505
    
    Docs patch from Rashi Aswani with minor fixes from me.

 help/C/view-photos.page |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/view-photos.page b/help/C/view-photos.page
index 82f89dc..fe391ee 100644
--- a/help/C/view-photos.page
+++ b/help/C/view-photos.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="view"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-05-20" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2015-01-26" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
       <email>aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
 
   <title>View recent photos</title>
 
-  <p>The <gui style="tab">Recent</gui> tab displays photos from the local file
-  system locations like <file>~/Downloads</file>, <file>~/Pictures</file>
-  and from the online collections. You can also add other locations, even
-  cloud-based collections like Flickr or Facebook photographs, through
+  <p>The <gui style="tab">Recent</gui> tab displays photos from local file
+  system locations such as <file>~/Downloads</file>, <file>~/Pictures</file>
+  and from online collections. You can also add other locations, even
+  cloud-based collections such as Flickr or Facebook photographs, through
   <app>GNOME Online Accounts</app>.</p>
 
   <p>To add other local file system locations:</p>