[gnome-klotski/wip/mallard-help-merge: 15/33] help: improve wordinging in moves.page
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-klotski/wip/mallard-help-merge: 15/33] help: improve wordinging in moves.page
- Date: Mon, 26 Jan 2015 15:52:09 +0000 (UTC)
commit 8bdde88049a9b4826fddde235569b8779a95b803
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date: Thu Jul 3 16:49:01 2014 +0530
help: improve wordinging in moves.page
Break the first sentence in the 'patterend-block-moves' section into two sentences in moves.page
help/C/moves.page | 13 +++++++------
1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/moves.page b/help/C/moves.page
index 5ab0cea..0111e17 100644
--- a/help/C/moves.page
+++ b/help/C/moves.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
+ <link type="seealso" xref="scores"/>
<revision version="3.12" date="2014-05-24" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
@@ -14,22 +15,22 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- </info>
+ <desc>Check the number of moves you made.</desc>
+ </info>
<title>Moves</title>
- <p>You can see your number of moves at the top of the game screen. The
+ <p>You can view your number of moves at the top of the game screen. The
consecutive moves of a block are considered to be a single move. For example,
moving a block up one square then right two squares is considered one
move.</p>
<section id="patterned-block-moves">
<title>Goal piece moves</title>
- <!-- Break the first sentence into two sentences. -->
- <p>The goal location may be positioned slightly off the board and the
- goal piece which is the patterned block is always permitted to move to
- it. However, no other blocks are permitted to move off the board</p>
+ <p>The goal location may be positioned slightly off the board. The
+ goal piece, which is the patterned block, is always permitted to move to
+ it. However, no other blocks are permitted to move off the board.</p>
</section>
</page>
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