[gnome-klotski/wip/mallard-help-merge: 31/35] help: rephrase description in index.page



commit e3848f0faa51dea64b62147718c7793e3402b930
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Tue Aug 26 13:37:22 2014 +0530

    help: rephrase description in index.page

 help/C/index.page |   11 +++++------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 3b1796c..2515c8a 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
   xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
-  id="index"
-  type="guide"
-  style="2column">
+  type="guide" style="2column"
+  id="index">
 
   <info>
     <title type="link" role="trail"><media type="image" its:translate="no"
@@ -22,9 +21,9 @@
 
   <title><media type="image" its:translate="no" src="figures/logo32.png">
   Klotski logo</media> Klotski</title>
-  <p>Slide blocks to solve the puzzle. To know more about the game, visit
-  <link xref="introduction">Game introduction</link>. Other help topics
-  are grouped together into sections below.</p>
+  <p>Slide blocks to solve the puzzle. For a quick introduction into the most
+  basic features of <app>Klotski</app>, visit
+  <link xref="introduction">Game introduction</link>.</p>
 
   <section id="play" style="2column">
     <title>Playing Klotski</title>


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