[gnome-klotski/wip/mallard-help-merge: 11/35] help: rephrase index desc and fix link



commit 6a3f143ed63776d2a447f80c2b122cb69cba9055
Author: Rashi Aswani <aswanirashi19 gmail com>
Date:   Thu Jul 3 02:56:45 2014 +0530

    help: rephrase index desc and fix link

 help/C/index.page |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 2d0b2ea..6d5a157 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -17,15 +17,15 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
+
+    <desc>GNOME Klotski help</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title><media type="image" its:translate="no" src="figures/logo32.png">
   Klotski logo</media> Klotski</title>
-  <p>Slide blocks to solve the puzzle. You can visit
-  <link xref="game-introduction">Game introduction</link> to know more about
-  the game. Other help topics are grouped together into sections below.</p>
-  <!--"You can visit" doesn't sound right. Rephrase this sentence to say "To know more about the game, visit 
<link>..." -->
-  <!--Why does the introduction link appear again on the index? Fix it. -->
+  <p>Slide blocks to solve the puzzle. To know more about the game, visit
+  <link xref="introduction">Game introduction</link>. Other help topics
+  are grouped together into sections below.</p>
 
   <section id="play" style="2column">
     <title>Playing Klotski</title>


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