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[gnome-taquin] help: edit

commit 4e3024e446814a9c2bd5da95e7e7dc2f355b35d2
Author: Michael Catanzaro <mcatanzaro gnome org>
Date:   Tue Jan 13 08:07:05 2015 -0600

    help: edit
    
    https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=742857

 help/C/15-Puzzle.page    |   26 +++++++++++++-------------
 help/C/16-Puzzle.page    |   18 +++++++++---------
 help/C/beginning.page    |   12 ++++++------
 help/C/index.page        |    2 +-
 help/C/shortcuts.page    |    4 ++--
 help/C/start-screen.page |    2 +-
 6 files changed, 32 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/15-Puzzle.page b/help/C/15-Puzzle.page
index 02b85c6..95cb9cf 100644
--- a/help/C/15-Puzzle.page
+++ b/help/C/15-Puzzle.page
@@ -17,14 +17,14 @@
 
   <title>15-Puzzle</title>
 
-  <p>The <em>15-Puzzle</em> is the default puzzle of <app>Taquin</app>. It is displayed at the first opening 
of the application, but you can launch it at every moment from the <link xref="start-screen">Start 
Screen</link>.</p>
+  <p>The <em>15-Puzzle</em> is the default puzzle of <app>Taquin</app>. It is displayed the first time the 
application is opened. You can start one at any time from the <link xref="start-screen">Start 
Screen</link>.</p>
 
   <section id="15-play">
     <title>Gameplay</title>
 
-    <p>The goal is to move all the tiles at their own place.</p>
+    <p>The goal is to move all the tiles to their proper places.</p>
 
-    <p>There’s an empty space where you can move adjacent tiles by pushing them on it. You can push in the 
empty space’s direction more than one tile at the same time.</p>
+    <p>There’s an empty space where you can move adjacent tiles by pushing them onto it. You can push more 
than one tile at the same time in the empty space’s direction.</p>
 
   </section>
   <section id="15-end">
@@ -34,39 +34,39 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="15-mouse">
-    <title>How to play with mouse</title>
+    <title>How to play with a mouse</title>
 
     <p>To make a move:</p>
     <steps>
-      <item><p>Click on a tile on the same row or column than the empty space.</p>
-      <note><p>If you click on a tile that cannot move, the game notifies you the move is impossible.</p>
+      <item><p>Click on a tile on the same row or column as the empty space.</p>
+      <note><p>If you click on a tile that cannot move, the game notifies you that the move is 
impossible.</p>
       </note>
       </item>
-      <item><p>You can always undo a move by clicking the <gui>Undo</gui> button at the left of the 
headerbar.</p>
+      <item><p>You can always undo a move by clicking the <gui>Undo</gui> button at the left of the header 
bar.</p>
       </item>
-      <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch game, click the <gui>Start Over</gui> 
button to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start Screen</link>.</p>
+      <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch games, click the <gui>Start Over</gui> 
button to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start Screen</link>.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>
 
-    <p>You can at every moment use the keyboard.</p>
+    <p>You can also use the keyboard.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="15-keyboard">
-    <title>How to play with keyboard</title>
+    <title>How to play with the keyboard</title>
 
     <p>To make a move:</p>
     <steps>
       <item><p>Use the <key>Left</key>, <key>Right</key>, <key>Up</key> and <key>Down</key> arrows to go at 
the tile you want to move. The currently selected tile is indicated with four arrows around the board, on 
each side of its row and column.</p></item>
       <item><p>Use the <key>Space</key> key to move the selected tile in the direction of the empty 
space.</p>
-      <note><p>If you click on a tile that cannot move, the game notifies you the move is impossible.</p>
+      <note><p>If you click on a tile that cannot move, the game notifies you that the move is 
impossible.</p>
       </note>
       </item>
       <item><p>You can always undo a move with the <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Z</key></keyseq> keys.</p>
       </item>
-      <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch game, use the the 
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq> keys to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start 
Screen</link>.</p>
+      <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch games, use the the 
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq> keys to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start 
Screen</link>.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>
 
-    <p>You can at every moment use the mouse.</p>
+    <p>You can also use a mouse.</p>
   </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/16-Puzzle.page b/help/C/16-Puzzle.page
index e249fd1..30e86db 100644
--- a/help/C/16-Puzzle.page
+++ b/help/C/16-Puzzle.page
@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@
 
   <title>16-Puzzle</title>
 
-  <p>The <em>16-Puzzle</em> is the variant puzzle of <app>Taquin</app>. You can launch it at every moment 
from the <link xref="start-screen">Start Screen</link>.</p>
+  <p>The <em>16-Puzzle</em> is the variant puzzle of <app>Taquin</app>. You can launch it at any time from 
the <link xref="start-screen">Start Screen</link>.</p>
 
   <section id="16-play">
     <title>Gameplay</title>
 
-    <p>The goal is to move all the tiles at their own place.</p>
+    <p>The goal is to move all the tiles to their proper places.</p>
 
     <p>You move all the tiles of a row or a column in one direction. The tile that is pushed out of the 
board is placed at the opposite side of the row or column.</p>
 
@@ -34,23 +34,23 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="16-mouse">
-    <title>How to play with mouse</title>
+    <title>How to play with a mouse</title>
 
     <p>To make a move:</p>
     <steps>
       <item><p>Click on one of the arrows displayed around the board. The row or column at the end of which 
this arrow is moves in this direction, and the tile that was next to the arrow is placed at the opposite 
side.</p>
       </item>
-      <item><p>You can always undo a move by clicking the <gui>Undo</gui> button at the left of the 
headerbar.</p>
+      <item><p>You can always undo a move by clicking the <gui>Undo</gui> button at the left of the header 
bar.</p>
       </item>
-      <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch game, click the <gui>Start Over</gui> 
button to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start Screen</link>.</p>
+      <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch games, click the <gui>Start Over</gui> 
button to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start Screen</link>.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>
 
-    <p>You can at every moment use the keyboard.</p>
+    <p>You can also use the keyboard.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="16-keyboard">
-    <title>How to play with keyboard</title>
+    <title>How to play with the keyboard</title>
 
     <p>To make a move:</p>
     <steps>
@@ -59,10 +59,10 @@
       </item>
       <item><p>You can always undo a move with the <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Z</key></keyseq> keys.</p>
       </item>
-      <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch game, use the the 
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq> keys to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start 
Screen</link>.</p>
+      <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch games, use the the 
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>N</key></keyseq> keys to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start 
Screen</link>.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>
 
-    <p>You can at every moment use the mouse.</p>
+    <p>You can also use a mouse.</p>
   </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/beginning.page b/help/C/beginning.page
index aa154c3..2e66812 100644
--- a/help/C/beginning.page
+++ b/help/C/beginning.page
@@ -17,21 +17,21 @@
 
   <title>Beginning</title>
 
-  <p>When <app>Taquin</app> is opened for the first time, you have a traditionnal <link 
xref="15-Puzzle">15-Puzzle</link> game.</p>
+  <p>When <app>Taquin</app> is opened for the first time, it displays a traditional <link 
xref="15-Puzzle">15-Puzzle</link> game.</p>
 
   <p>The game is played using the mouse. To make a move:</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click on a tile on the same row or column than the empty space.</p>
-    <note><p>If you click on a tile that cannot move, the game notifies you the move is impossible.</p>
+    <item><p>Click on a tile on the same row or column as the empty space.</p>
+    <note><p>If you click on a tile that cannot move, the game notifies you that the move is impossible.</p>
     </note>
     </item>
-    <item><p>You can always undo a move by clicking the <gui>Undo</gui> button at the left of the 
headerbar.</p>
+    <item><p>You can always undo a move by clicking the <gui>Undo</gui> button on the left of the header 
bar.</p>
     </item>
-    <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch game, click the <gui>Start Over</gui> button 
to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start Screen</link>.</p>
+    <item><p>At the end of the game, or when you want to switch games, click the <gui>Start Over</gui> 
button to go to the <link xref="start-screen">Start Screen</link>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>The other times <app>Taquin</app> is opened, it displays a puzzle with the same rules and dimensions as 
the last one played, so it could be a <link xref="16-Puzzle">16-Puzzle</link> game.</p>
+  <p>After the first time it is opened, <app>Taquin</app> displays a puzzle with the same rules and 
dimensions as the last one played when it is opened, so it could be a <link xref="16-Puzzle">16-Puzzle</link> 
game.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 3a7bc46..e0daac6 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
 <!-- <title><media type="image" src="figures/logo32.png" its:translate="no"><span its:translate="yes">Taquin 
logo</span></media> Taquin</title> TODO -->
 
-  <p><app>Taquin</app> is a sliding puzzles game. It includes the traditionnal 15-Puzzle invented in the 
early 1880s, and a more recent variant.
+  <p><app>Taquin</app> is a sliding-block puzzle game. It includes the traditional 15-Puzzle invented in the 
early 1880s, and the more recent 16-Puzzle variant.
   </p>
 
   <section id="play" style="2column">
diff --git a/help/C/shortcuts.page b/help/C/shortcuts.page
index 76fe9bd..3f88539 100644
--- a/help/C/shortcuts.page
+++ b/help/C/shortcuts.page
@@ -15,9 +15,9 @@
     <desc></desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Keyboard shortcuts</title>
+  <title>Keyboard Shortcuts</title>
 
-  <p><app>Taquin</app> could easily be used with keyboard. The <link 
xref="15-Puzzle#15-keyboard">15-Puzzle</link> and <link xref="16-Puzzle#16-keyboard">16-Puzzle</link> both 
have specific shortcuts.</p>
+  <p><app>Taquin</app> can easily be used with keyboard. The <link 
xref="15-Puzzle#15-keyboard">15-Puzzle</link> and <link xref="16-Puzzle#16-keyboard">16-Puzzle</link> both 
have specific shortcuts.</p>
 
   <section id="game">
     <title>In-game shortcuts</title>
diff --git a/help/C/start-screen.page b/help/C/start-screen.page
index 8c7e978..c1ee751 100644
--- a/help/C/start-screen.page
+++ b/help/C/start-screen.page
@@ -17,6 +17,6 @@
 
   <title>Start Screen</title>
   <p>The <em>Start Screen</em> is the place to select your options and launch a new game, either a <link 
xref="15-Puzzle">15-Puzzle</link> or a <link xref="16-Puzzle">16-Puzzle</link>.</p>
-  <p>It could be accessed at any time from a game by pressing the <gui>Start Over</gui> button.</p>
+  <p>It can be accessed at any time from a game by pressing the <gui>Start Over</gui> button.</p>
 
 </page>
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