[gnome-user-docs] Minor wording improvement to the lockdown page



commit 6eea9656edfcf760380c84df0fd415503e8f1ccb
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Feb 13 21:45:37 2015 +0000

    Minor wording improvement to the lockdown page

 system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page |    5 +++--
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page b/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page
index d111fb7..e8b4f89 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/dconf-lockdown.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <!--    <link type="seealso" xref="dconf-profiles" />-->
     <revision version="0.1" date="2012-05-21" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-04-26" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2015-02-13" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.15" date="2015-02-13" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Ryan Lortie</name>
@@ -44,7 +44,8 @@
       you will learn how to lock <link xref="desktop-background">a background
       setting</link> once it has been set. At this point, you should have
       <link xref="dconf-profiles">a <sys>user</sys> profile</link> and
-      <link xref="dconf-keyfiles">a keyfile</link> with some settings.</p>
+      <link xref="dconf-keyfiles">a keyfile</link> with the settings that you
+      want to lock down.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Create a directory named


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