[gimp-web/testing] Straight line tutorial's tone was inappropriate

[Alexandre Prokoudine <aprokoudine src gnome org>]

commit a033341e6df38de3474b8744ecfcee4ad27b34ba
Author: Alexandre Prokoudine <alexandre prokoudine gmail com>
Date:   Thu Dec 17 13:19:05 2015 +0300

    Straight line tutorial's tone was inappropriate

 content/tutorials/Straight_Line/index.md |   28 ++++++++--------------------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/content/tutorials/Straight_Line/index.md b/content/tutorials/Straight_Line/index.md
index f70f026..8fcedea 100644
--- a/content/tutorials/Straight_Line/index.md
+++ b/content/tutorials/Straight_Line/index.md
@@ -12,27 +12,17 @@ Text and images Copyright (C) 2002 [Seth Burgess](mailto:sjburgesNOSPAM gimp org
 <img src="{filename}straight_line_example.png" alt="straight_line_example.png"/>
 </figure>
 
-This tutorial shows you how you can do straight lines with GIMP, using a feature called the Shift Key. 
Straight lines are a convenient way to make things that aren't so terribly affected by the imprecision of a 
mouse or tablet, and to take advantage of the power of a computer to make things look neat and orderly. This 
tutorial doesn't use Straight Lines for complex tasks; its intended to show how you can use it to create 
quick and easy line effects.
+This tutorial shows you how you can do straight lines with GIMP, using the Shift key. This tutorial doesn't 
use straight lines for complex tasks; its intended to show how you can use it to create quick and easy line 
effects.
 
 ## Step 1
 
 <figure>
-<img src="{filename}shiftkey.png" alt="shiftkey.png"/>
-<img src="{filename}mouse.png" alt="mouse.png"/>
-</figure>
-
-The invention called the typewriter introduced the Shift Key. You generally have 2 of them on your keyboard. 
They look something like the picture on the left. They are located on the left and right sides of your 
keyboard.  
-The other invention, called the Mouse, was invented by Douglas C. Engelbart in 1970. These come in different 
varieties, but always have at least one button located on them. They are located on your desk, or sometimes 
on a mouse pad.
-
-## Step 2
-
-<figure>
 <img src="{filename}blankimage.png" alt="blankimage.png"/>
 </figure>
 
 First, create a new image. Any size will do.
 
-## Step 3
+## Step 2
 
 <figure>
 <img src="{filename}toolbox.png" alt="toolbox.png"/>
@@ -40,7 +30,7 @@ First, create a new image. Any size will do.
 
 Then click on the paintbrush. Any of the red-highlighted tools on the above toolbox can do lines.
 
-## Step 4
+## Step 3
 
 <figure>
 <img src="{filename}startdot.png" alt="startdot.png"/>
@@ -49,14 +39,14 @@ Then click on the paintbrush. Any of the red-highlighted tools on the above tool
 After you click the paintbrush tool, you can click the image. A single dot will appear on the screen. The 
size of this dot represents the current brush size, which you can change in the Brush Dialog.  
 Now, lets start drawing a line. Hold down the Shift button, and keep it down.
 
-## Step 5
+## Step 4
 
 <figure>
 <img src="{filename}draggedline.png" alt="draggedline.png"/>
 </figure>
 
-After you have a starting point, and have held down the Shift Key, you'll see a line like above if you're 
running GIMP version 1.2.x or later. This feature was not present in GIMP version 1.0.4. However, the next 
step works the same way.  
-Press the first button on the Mouse (the leftmost one usually) and then let it go. During that whole "click" 
of the Mouse button, you need to keep the Shift Key held down.
+After you have a starting point, and have held down the Shift key, you'll see a line like above if you're 
running GIMP version 1.2.x or later. This feature was not present in GIMP version 1.0.4. However, the next 
step works the same way.  
+Press the first button on the Mouse (the leftmost one usually) and then let it go. During that whole "click" 
of the Mouse button, you need to keep the Shift key held down.
 
 ## Final
 
@@ -64,8 +54,8 @@ Press the first button on the Mouse (the leftmost one usually) and then let it g
 <img src="{filename}drawnline.png" alt="drawnline.png"/>
 </figure>
 
-See how the line is drawn on top of the preview? This is a powerful feature of the Paint Brush. You can use 
it with any of the tools shown in step 4, or even draw more lines at the end of this one.  
-Our last step is to let go of the Shift key. And there you have it. Some more examples are shown below. 
Questions? Comments? Let me know.  
+See how the line is drawn on top of the preview? This is a powerful feature of the Paint Brush. You can use 
it with any of the tools shown in step 3, or even draw more lines at the end of this one.  
+Some more examples are shown below.
 Happy GIMPing!  
 Seth
 
@@ -101,6 +91,4 @@ This one I rendered a plasma cloud, and used the Erase Tool with a square brush.
 
 This one I used the Dodge tool on the top and left of a blue box, then used the burn tool on the right and 
bottom.
 
-The original tutorial can be found [here](http://classic.gimp.org/~sjburges/straightline/straightline.html).
-