[gimp-web/testing] More adjustments to the front page intro text to address Bug 758510

[Alexandre Prokoudine <aprokoudine src gnome org>]

commit 104b6661128cafc7c3e4acf3058cf7f0dad543bb
Author: Alexandre Prokoudine <alexandre prokoudine gmail com>
Date:   Wed Dec 16 02:41:49 2015 +0300

    More adjustments to the front page intro text to address Bug 758510

 themes/newgimp/templates/home.html |   20 +++++++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/themes/newgimp/templates/home.html b/themes/newgimp/templates/home.html
index ca829c6..94beb2e 100644
--- a/themes/newgimp/templates/home.html
+++ b/themes/newgimp/templates/home.html
@@ -63,16 +63,22 @@
                        (GIMP).
                     </p>
                     <p>
-                        GIMP is the <a href='https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html' 
-                       title='GNU - The Free Software Definition'>free</a> and open source, 
-                       cross-platform image editor available for GNU/Linux, Mac OS X, Windows, 
-                       and more operating systems.
+                        GIMP is a cross-platform image editor available for GNU/Linux, 
+                       OS&nbsp;X, Windows and more operating systems. It is 
+                       <a href='https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html' 
+                       title='GNU - The Free Software Definition' target=_blank">free 
+                       software</a>, you can change its 
+                       <a href="https://git.gnome.org/browse/gimp"; 
+                       title='Source code repository of GIMP' target=_blank">source code</a> 
+                       and <a href="http://www.gnu.org/licenses/quick-guide-gplv3.en.html"; 
+                       title='A Quick Guide to GPLv3' target=_blank">distribute</a> 
+                       your changes.
                     </p>
                     <p>
                         Whether you are a graphic designer, photographer, illustrator, or 
-                       scientist, GIMP provides you sophisticated tools to get your job done. 
-                       You can further enhance your productivity with GIMP thanks to many 
-                       customization options and 3rd party plugins.
+                       scientist, GIMP provides you with sophisticated tools to get your job 
+                       done. You can further enhance your productivity with GIMP thanks to 
+                       many customization options and 3rd party plugins.
                     </p>
                 </div>