[gimp-web/testing] Remove "happy talk" from the front page - Bug 724440

[Alexandre Prokoudine <aprokoudine src gnome org>]

commit 5eaa9a74a170af25cc390510b9c7536aa92f9eb8
Author: Alexandre Prokoudine <alexandre prokoudine gmail com>
Date:   Tue Dec 15 01:59:02 2015 +0300

    Remove "happy talk" from the front page - Bug 724440

 themes/newgimp/templates/home.html |   17 +++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/themes/newgimp/templates/home.html b/themes/newgimp/templates/home.html
index 431e34d..8e62bc4 100644
--- a/themes/newgimp/templates/home.html
+++ b/themes/newgimp/templates/home.html
@@ -59,16 +59,17 @@
                 <div class='column half'>
                     <h2>The Free &amp; Open Source Image Editor</h2>
                     <p>
-                        This is the official website of the GNU Image Manipulation Program (GIMP).
+                        GNU Image Manipulation Program (GIMP) is the 
+                       <a href='https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html' 
+                       title='GNU - The Free Software Definition'>free</a> and open source, 
+                       cross-platform image editor available for GNU/Linux, Mac OS X, Windows, 
+                       and more operating systems.
                     </p>
                     <p>
-                        It is the <a href='https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html' title='GNU - The 
Free Software Definition'>free</a> and open source, cross-platform image editor available for
-                        GNU/Linux, OS X, Windows and more.
-                    </p>
-                    <p>
-                        You will find information here about downloading, installing, using, and enhancing 
it.
-                        We try to provide as much information about the GIMP community and related projects 
as possible.
-                        Grab a properly chilled beverage and enjoy...
+                        Whether you are a graphic designer, photographer, illustrator, or 
+                       scientist, GIMP provides you sophisticated tools to get your job done. 
+                       You can further enhance your productivity with GIMP thanks to many 
+                       customization options, 3rd party plugins, and an extensions framework.
                     </p>
                 </div>