[gnome-user-docs] Review privacy-* pages for 3.14

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit b1f6129aa0cf8eb6a84583ea37caf7f36c088c32
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Mon Sep 22 21:14:39 2014 +0100

    Review privacy-* pages for 3.14

 gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page |   47 +++++++++++---------
 gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page              |   58 ++++++++++++++-----------
 gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page        |   17 +++++---
 gnome-help/C/privacy.page                    |   32 ++++++++------
 4 files changed, 87 insertions(+), 67 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
index 15b33ef..c8df802 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-history-recent-off.page
@@ -3,30 +3,35 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="privacy-history-recent-off">
 
-<info>
-  
-  <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
-  <desc>Stop or limit your computer from tracking your recently-used files.</desc>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-11" status="final"/>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
-  <credit type="author">
-    <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-    <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
-  </credit>
-  <credit type="editor">
-    <name>Michael Hill</name>
-    <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
-  </credit>
-</info>
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-11" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+
+    <desc>Stop or limit your computer from tracking your recently-used
+    files.</desc>
+  </info>
 
   <title>Turn off or limit file history tracking</title>
   
-    <p>Tracking recently-used files and folders can make it easier to
-    find items that you have been working on, but you may wish to keep
-    these items private.</p>
+  <p>Tracking recently-used files and folders can make it easier to
+  find items that you have been working on, but you may wish to keep
+  these items private.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To turn off the file history tracking features of your desktop:</title>
+    <title>To turn off the file history tracking features of your
+    desktop:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
       start typing <gui>Privacy</gui>.</p>
@@ -48,8 +53,8 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
   
-    <note><p>This setting will not affect how your web browser stores
-    information about the web sites you visit.</p></note>
+  <note><p>This setting will not affect how your web browser stores information
+  about the web sites you visit.</p></note>
 
   <steps>
     <title>To restrict the amount of time your file history is tracked:</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
index c2528a7..49a6825 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-purge.page
@@ -3,21 +3,26 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="privacy-purge">
 
-<info>
-  <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
-  <desc>Set how often your trash and temporary files will be cleared
-  from your computer.</desc>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-29" status="review"/>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
-  <credit type="author">
-    <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-    <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
-  </credit>
-  <credit type="editor">
-    <name>Michael Hill</name>
-    <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
-  </credit>
-</info>
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-29" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+
+    <desc>Set how often your trash and temporary files will be cleared
+    from your computer.</desc>
+  </info>
+
   <title>Purge trash &amp; temporary files</title>
 
   <p>Clearing out your trash and temporary files removes
@@ -54,18 +59,19 @@
       buttons to perform these actions immediately.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>X</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note style="warning"><p>Use the <em>Purge After: Immediately</em> setting
-  with caution. Setting your trash to be purged immediately will
-  cause any files you delete to skip your trash and be permanently
-  deleted. Files that are deleted are much more difficult to recover than files
-  that are in your trash.</p>
-  
-  <p>Unless you have a specific need to immediately delete files from
-  your trash, it is probably safer to set a longer <gui>Purge After</gui>
-  value.</p></note>
-  
+  <note style="warning">
+    <p>Use the <em>Purge After: Immediately</em> setting with caution. Setting
+    your trash to be purged immediately will cause any files you delete to skip
+    your trash and be permanently deleted. Files that are deleted are much more
+    difficult to recover than files that are in your trash.</p>
+
+    <p>Unless you have a specific need to immediately delete files from your
+    trash, it is probably safer to set a longer <gui>Purge After</gui>
+    value.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
index 5f96dd3..70aebad 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy-screen-lock.page
@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="privacy"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="session-screenlocks"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-exit#lock-screen"/>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-05-21" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
-    <desc>Prevent other people from using your desktop when you
-    go away from your computer.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
@@ -26,7 +26,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Prevent other people from using your desktop when you
+    go away from your computer.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Automatically lock your screen</title>
@@ -56,21 +60,22 @@
       <p>Select <gui>Screen Lock</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Make sure <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is switched on, then
-      select a length of time from the drop-down list.</p>
+      <p>Make sure <gui>Automatic Screen Lock</gui> is switched <gui>ON</gui>,
+      then select a length of time from the drop-down list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>To allow notifications to be displayed on the lock screen, switch
       <gui>Show Notifications</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>X</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>When your screen is locked, and you want to unlock it, press
   <key>Esc</key>, or swipe up from the bottom of the screen with your mouse.
   Then enter your password, and press <key>Enter</key> or click
-  <gui>Unlock</gui>.</p>
+  <gui>Unlock</gui>. Alternatively, just start typing your password and the
+  lock curtain will be automatically raised as you type.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/privacy.page b/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
index a10a857..827937b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/privacy.page
@@ -3,25 +3,29 @@
       type="guide" style="task 2column"
       id="privacy">
 
-<info>
-  <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-28" status="review"/>
-  <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-09-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+
     <desc>
       <link xref="privacy-screen-lock">Screen lock</link>,
       <link xref="privacy-history-recent-off">Usage history</link>,
       <link xref="privacy-purge">Purge trash &amp; temporary files</link>…
     </desc>
-  <credit type="author">
-    <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-    <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
-    <years>2013</years>
-  </credit>
-  <credit type="editor">
-    <name>Michael Hill</name>
-    <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
-  </credit>
-</info>
+  </info>
 
   <title>Privacy Settings</title>