[gnome-user-docs] Review screen-shot-record for 3.14

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit 5917b44d27c641580126b4f20466f400415ac054
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Mon Sep 22 20:49:03 2014 +0100

    Review screen-shot-record for 3.14

 gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page |  159 +++++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 88 insertions(+), 71 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page b/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
index 6de8a06..dbe31cb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
@@ -3,11 +3,10 @@
       id="screen-shot-record">
 
   <info>
-
     <link type="guide" xref="tips"/>
 
-    <desc>Take a picture or record a video of what's happening on your screen.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6.1" date="2012-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -25,86 +24,104 @@
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Take a picture or record a video of what is happening on your
+    screen.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Screenshots and screencasts</title>
 
   <p>You can take a picture of your screen (a <em>screenshot</em>) or record a
- video of what's happening on the screen (a <em>screencast</em>). This is useful
- if you want to show someone how to do something on the computer, for example.
- Screenshots and screencasts are just normal picture and video files, so you can
- email them and share them on the web.</p>
+  video of what is happening on the screen (a <em>screencast</em>). This is
+  useful if you want to show someone how to do something on the computer, for
+  example. Screenshots and screencasts are just normal picture and video files,
+  so you can email them and share them on the web.</p>
 
 <section id="screenshot">
- <title>Take a screenshot</title>
-<steps>
-<item><p>Open <app>Screenshot</app> from the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p></item>
-
-<item>
- <p>In the <app>Take Screenshot</app> window, select whether to grab the
- whole screen, the current window, or an area of the screen. Set a delay
- if you need to select a window or otherwise set up your desktop for
- the screenshot. Then choose any effects you want.</p>
-</item>
-
-<item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Take Screenshot</gui>.</p>
-  <p>If you selected <gui>Select area to grab</gui>, the pointer changes into
-  a crosshair. Click and drag the area you want for the screenshot.</p>
-</item>
-
-<item>
-  <p>In the <gui>Save Screenshot</gui> window, enter a file name and choose a
-  folder, then click <gui>Save</gui>.</p>
-  <p>Alternatively, import the screenshot directly into an image-editing application
-  without saving it first. Click <gui>Copy to Clipboard</gui> then paste the image in
-  the other application, or drag the screenshot thumbnail to the application.</p>
-</item>
-</steps>
-
-<note style="tip">
-  <title>Keyboard shortcuts</title>
-  <p>Quickly take a screenshot of the desktop, a window, or an area at any time
-  using these global keyboard shortcuts:</p>
-  <list style="compact">
-    <item><p><key>Prt Scrn</key> to take a screenshot of the desktop.</p></item>
-    <item><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Prt Scrn</key></keyseq> to take a screenshot
-    of a window.</p></item>
-    <item><p><keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>Prt Scrn</key></keyseq> to take a screenshot
-    of an area you select.</p></item>
-  </list>
-  <p>When you use a keyboard shortcut, the image is automatically saved in
-  your Pictures folder with a file name that begins with "Screenshot" and
-  includes the date and time it was taken.</p>
-  <p>You can also hold down <key>Ctrl</key> with any of the above shortcuts to
-  copy the screenshot image to the clipboard instead of saving it.</p>
-</note>
-</section>
+  <title>Take a screenshot</title>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open <app>Screenshot</app> from the
+      <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>In the <app>Screenshot</app> window, select whether to grab the whole
+      screen, the current window, or an area of the screen. Set a delay if you
+      need to select a window or otherwise set up your desktop for the
+      screenshot. Then choose any effects you want.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+       <p>Click <gui>Take Screenshot</gui>.</p>
+       <p>If you selected <gui>Select area to grab</gui>, the pointer changes
+       into a crosshair. Click and drag the area you want for the
+       screenshot.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>In the <gui>Save Screenshot</gui> window, enter a file name and choose
+      a folder, then click <gui>Save</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Alternatively, import the screenshot directly into an image-editing
+      application without saving it first. Click <gui>Copy to Clipboard</gui>
+      then paste the image in the other application, or drag the screenshot
+      thumbnail to the application.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+  <note style="tip">
+    <title>Keyboard shortcuts</title>
+
+    <p>Quickly take a screenshot of the desktop, a window, or an area at any
+    time using these global keyboard shortcuts:</p>
+
+    <list style="compact">
+      <item>
+        <p><key>Prt Scrn</key> to take a screenshot of the desktop.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Prt Scrn</key></keyseq> to take a
+        screenshot of a window.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p><keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>Prt Scrn</key></keyseq> to take a
+        screenshot of an area you select.</p>
+      </item>
+    </list>
+
+    <p>When you use a keyboard shortcut, the image is automatically saved in
+    your <file>Pictures</file> folder in your home folder with a file name that
+    begins with <file>Screenshot</file> and includes the date and time it was
+    taken.</p>
+    <p>You can also hold down <key>Ctrl</key> with any of the above shortcuts
+    to copy the screenshot image to the clipboard instead of saving it.</p>
+  </note>
 
+</section>
 
 <section id="screencast">
-<title>Make a screencast</title>
+  <title>Make a screencast</title>
+
   <p>You can make a video recording of what is happening on your screen:</p>
 
-<steps>
-<item>
-  <p>Press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>R</key></keyseq>
- to start recording what's on your screen.</p>
-  <p>A red circle is displayed in the bottom right corner of the screen when the
- recording is in progress. This indicator does not show up in the video.</p>
-</item>
-
-<item>
-  <p>Once you've finished, press
- <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>R</key></keyseq>
- again to stop the recording.</p>
-</item>
-
-<item>
-  <p>The video is automatically saved in your Videos folder with a file name
-  that starts with "Screencast" and includes the date and time it was taken.</p>
-</item>
-</steps>
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press
+      <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>R</key></keyseq>
+      to start recording what is on your screen.</p>
+      <p>A red circle is displayed in the bottom right corner of the screen
+      when the recording is in progress.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Once you have finished, press
+      <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>R</key></keyseq>
+      again to stop the recording.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The video is automatically saved in your <file>Videos</file> folder
+      in your home folder, with a file name that starts with
+      <file>Screencast</file> and includes the date and time it was taken.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
 </section>
 
 </page>