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[gnome-user-docs] Review sharing-* pages for 3.14

commit f5b9df7f368386a554abfd114a1c384f21d1a9c1
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Mon Sep 22 19:49:17 2014 +0100

    Review sharing-* pages for 3.14

 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page     |   17 +++++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page |    5 ++++-
 gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page       |   18 ++++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page    |   20 ++++++++++++--------
 4 files changed, 39 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index 1ffded6..3360fe7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.3" date="2013-05-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -18,15 +19,17 @@
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Let other people view and interact with your desktop using VNC.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Let other people view and interact with your desktop using VNC.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Share your desktop</title>
 
-  <p>You can let other people view and control your desktop from another computer
- with a desktop viewing application. Configure <gui>Screen Sharing</gui> to
- allow others to access your desktop and set the security preferences.</p>
+  <p>You can let other people view and control your desktop from another
+  computer with a desktop viewing application. Configure <gui>Screen
+  Sharing</gui> to allow others to access your desktop and set the security
+  preferences.</p>
 
   <note style="info package">
     <p>You must have the <app>Vino</app> package installed for
@@ -78,6 +81,12 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2014-09-22">David King</cite>
+    <p>The controls for sharing with specific networks, under the Networks
+    section needs to be explained, perhaps as a separate page.</p>
+  </comment>
+
   <section id="security">
   <title>Security</title>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page
index c0b9cdc..9c7cb59 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-displayname.page
@@ -2,10 +2,12 @@
       xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="sharing-displayname">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="settings-sharing" group="#first"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -13,9 +15,10 @@
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
 
+    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
     <desc>Control how your computer will appear to other computers or
     devices.</desc>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
   <title>Set the display name for your computer</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
index d31373b..625e63b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-media.page
@@ -8,26 +8,28 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-02" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Share media on your local network using Rygel.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Share media on your local network using UPnP.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Share your music, photos and videos</title>
 
   <p>You can browse, search and play the media on your computer using a
- <sys>UPnP</sys> or <sys>DLNA</sys> enabled device such as a phone, TV or game
- console. Configure <gui>Media Sharing</gui> to allow these devices to access
- the folders containing your music, photos and videos.</p>
+  <sys>UPnP</sys> or <sys>DLNA</sys> enabled device such as a phone, TV or game
+  console. Configure <gui>Media Sharing</gui> to allow these devices to access
+  the folders containing your music, photos and videos.</p>
 
   <note style="info package">
-    <p>You must have the <app>Rygel</app> package installed for
-     <gui>Media Sharing</gui> to be visible.</p>
+    <p>You must have the <app>Rygel</app> package installed for <gui>Media
+    Sharing</gui> to be visible.</p>
 
     <if:choose xmlns:if="http://projectmallard.org/if/1.0/";>
       <if:when test="action:install">
@@ -56,7 +58,7 @@
       <p>Select <gui>Media Sharing</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Switch <gui>Share Media On This Network</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Switch <gui>Media Sharing</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui style="button">+</gui> to open the
@@ -67,7 +69,7 @@
       <file>Videos</file>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui style="button">Close</gui>. You will now be able to browse
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">X</gui>. You will now be able to browse
       or play media in the folders you selected using the external device.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
index 8c314f9..8578ba7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-personal.page
@@ -8,14 +8,17 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.1" date="2013-09-23" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Let other people access files in your <file>Public</file> folder.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Let other people access files in your <file>Public</file>
+    folder.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Share your personal files</title>
@@ -28,9 +31,9 @@
   </comment>
 
   <p>You can allow access to the <file>Public</file> folder in your
- <file>Home</file> folder from another computer on the network. Configure
- <gui>Personal File Sharing</gui> to allow others to access the contents of the
- folder.</p>
+  <file>Home</file> folder from another computer on the network. Configure
+  <gui>Personal File Sharing</gui> to allow others to access the contents of
+  the folder.</p>
 
   <note style="info package">
     <p>You must have the <app>gnome-user-share</app> package installed for
@@ -65,11 +68,12 @@
       <p>Select <gui>Personal File Sharing</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Switch <gui>Share Public Folder On This Network</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.
-      This means that other people will be able to attempt to connect to your
-      computer and access files in your <file>Public</file> folder.</p>
+      <p>Switch <gui>Personal File Sharing</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>. This means
+      that other people on your current network will be able to attempt to
+      connect to your computer and access files in your <file>Public</file>
+      folder.</p>
       <note style="info">
-        <p>A <em>url</em> is displayed by which your <file>Public</file> folder
+        <p>A <em>URI</em> is displayed by which your <file>Public</file> folder
         can be accessed from other computers on the network.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
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