[gnome-user-docs] Finish reviewing all bluetooth-* pages
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Finish reviewing all bluetooth-* pages
- Date: Mon, 22 Sep 2014 17:21:16 +0000 (UTC)
commit cc90b26aaa2584f4644ff3b91644cd043a26cdbd
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date: Mon Sep 22 18:24:02 2014 +0100
Finish reviewing all bluetooth-* pages
gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page | 81 ++++++++++++------------
gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page | 47 ++++++++------
gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page | 33 +++++-----
gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page | 44 +++++++------
gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page | 34 +++++------
5 files changed, 124 insertions(+), 115 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
index 2686b8c..8c200f9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
@@ -9,12 +9,9 @@
<link type="seealso" xref="hardware-driver"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
- <desc>The adapter could be turned off or may not have drivers, or Bluetooth
- might be disabled or blocked.</desc>
-
<credit type="author">
<name>Phil Bull</name>
<email its:translate="no">philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -23,31 +20,36 @@
<name>Michael Hill</name>
<email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
</credit>
+
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+ <desc>The adapter could be turned off or may not have drivers, or Bluetooth
+ might be disabled or blocked.</desc>
</info>
-<title>I can't connect my Bluetooth device</title>
+ <title>I cannot connect my Bluetooth device</title>
-<p>There are a number of reasons why you may not be able to connect to a
-Bluetooth device, such as a phone or headset.</p>
+ <p>There are a number of reasons why you may not be able to connect to a
+ Bluetooth device, such as a phone or headset.</p>
-<terms>
- <item>
- <title>Connection blocked or untrusted</title>
- <p>Some Bluetooth devices block connections by default, or require you to change
- a setting to allow connections to be made. Make sure that your device is set
- up to allow connections.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
- <title>Bluetooth hardware not recognized</title>
- <p>Your Bluetooth adapter/dongle may not have been recognized by the computer.
- This could be because <link xref="hardware-driver">drivers</link> for the
- adapter aren't installed. Some Bluetooth adapters aren't supported on Linux,
- so you may not be able to get the right drivers for them. In this case, you
- will probably have to get a different Bluetooth adapter.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
- <title>Adapter not switched on</title>
+ <terms>
+ <item>
+ <title>Connection blocked or untrusted</title>
+ <p>Some Bluetooth devices block connections by default, or require you to
+ change a setting to allow connections to be made. Make sure that your
+ device is set up to allow connections.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <title>Bluetooth hardware not recognized</title>
+ <p>Your Bluetooth adapter or dongle may not have been recognized by the
+ computer. This could be because
+ <link xref="hardware-driver">drivers</link> for the adapter are not
+ installed. Some Bluetooth adapters are not supported on Linux, so you may
+ not be able to get the right drivers for them. In this case, you will
+ probably have to get a different Bluetooth adapter.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <title>Adapter is not switched on</title>
<if:choose>
<if:when test="platform:unity">
<p>Make sure that your Bluetooth adapter is switched on. Click the
@@ -55,24 +57,23 @@ Bluetooth device, such as a phone or headset.</p>
<link xref="bluetooth-turn-on-off">disabled</link>.</p>
</if:when>
<p>Make sure that your Bluetooth adapter is switched on. Open the
- Bluetooth panel and check that it's not
+ Bluetooth panel and check that it is not
<link xref="bluetooth-turn-on-off">disabled</link>.</p>
</if:choose>
- </item>
- <item>
- <title>Device Bluetooth connection switched off</title>
- <p>Check that Bluetooth is turned on on the device you're trying to connect
- to, and that it is
- <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">discoverable or visible</link>. For
- example, if you're trying to connect to a phone, make sure that it's not in
- airplane mode.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
- <title>No Bluetooth adapter in your computer</title>
- <p>Many computers do not have Bluetooth adapters. You can buy an adapter if
- you want to use Bluetooth.</p>
- </item>
-</terms>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <title>Device Bluetooth connection switched off</title>
+ <p>Check that Bluetooth is turned on on the device you are trying to
+ connect to, and that it is <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">discoverable
+ or visible</link>. For example, if you are trying to connect to a phone,
+ make sure that it is not in airplane mode.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <title>No Bluetooth adapter in your computer</title>
+ <p>Many computers do not have Bluetooth adapters. You can buy an adapter
+ if you want to use Bluetooth.</p>
+ </item>
+ </terms>
<comment>
<cite date="2013-11-09" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">mdhill</cite>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
index adbf679..7b871f9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
@@ -8,10 +8,9 @@
<link type="guide" xref="bluetooth"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-07" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-07" status="review"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
-
- <desc>Remove a device from the list of Bluetooth devices.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -26,12 +25,20 @@
<email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
<years>2014</years>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+ <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+ <years>2014</years>
+ </credit>
+
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+ <desc>Remove a device from the list of Bluetooth devices.</desc>
</info>
- <title>Remove a connection between Bluetooth devices</title>
+ <title>Disconnect a Bluetooth device</title>
- <p>If you don't want to be connected to a Bluetooth device anymore, you can
+ <p>If you do not want to be connected to a Bluetooth device anymore, you can
remove the connection. This is useful if you no longer want to use a device
like a mouse or headset, or if you no longer wish to transfer files to or
from a device.</p>
@@ -45,34 +52,32 @@
<item>
<if:choose>
<if:when test="platform:unity">
- <p>Click the Bluetooth icon in the <gui>menu bar</gui> and select
- <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui>.</p>
+ <p>Click the Bluetooth icon in the <gui>menu bar</gui> and select
+ <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui>.</p>
</if:when>
- <p>Click the system status area of the top bar.</p>
+ <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+ start typing <gui>Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
</if:choose>
</item>
<item>
<if:choose>
- <if:when test="platform:gnome-shell">
- <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
- expand.</p>
+ <if:when test="platform:unity">
+ <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> to open the panel.</p>
</if:when>
+ <p>Click on <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to open the panel.</p>
</if:choose>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+ <p>Select the device which you want to disconnect from the list.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Select the device you want to disconnect from the list.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
- <p>In the device dialogue box, switch <gui>Connection</gui> to
- <gui>OFF</gui> and click <gui>Done</gui>, or to remove the device from
- the <gui>Devices</gui> list, click <gui>Remove Device</gui>.</p>
+ <p>In the device dialog box, switch <gui>Connection</gui> to
+ <gui>OFF</gui>, or to remove the device from the <gui>Devices</gui> list,
+ click <gui>Remove Device</gui>.</p>
</item>
</steps>
- <p>You can
- <link xref="bluetooth-connect-device">reconnect a Bluetooth device</link>
- later if desired.</p>
+ <p>You can <link xref="bluetooth-connect-device">reconnect a Bluetooth
+ device</link> later if desired.</p>
+
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
index 3129600..64b565b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
@@ -9,11 +9,10 @@
<link type="guide" xref="sharing"/>
<link type="seealso" xref="files-share"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.2" date="2013-05-16" status="review"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" date="2013-05-16" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
-
- <desc>Share files to Bluetooth devices such as your phone.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -27,8 +26,15 @@
<name>Michael Hill</name>
<email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+ <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+ <years>2014</years>
+ </credit>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+ <desc>Share files to Bluetooth devices such as your phone.</desc>
</info>
<title>Send files to a Bluetooth device</title>
@@ -42,21 +48,18 @@
window, or directly from the file manager.</p>
</if:when>
<p>You can send files to connected Bluetooth devices, such as some mobile
- phones or other computers. Some types of devices don't allow the transfer
+ phones or other computers. Some types of devices do not allow the transfer
of files, or specific types of files. You can send files using the Bluetooth
settings window.</p>
</if:choose>
<steps>
<item>
- <p>Click the system status area of the top bar.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
- <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
- expand.</p>
+ <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+ start typing <gui>Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+ <p>Click on <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to open the panel.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>Make sure Bluetooth is enabled: the switch in the titlebar should be
@@ -70,7 +73,7 @@
<p>A panel specific to the external device appears.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Click <gui>Send Files...</gui> and the file chooser will appear.</p>
+ <p>Click <gui>Send Files…</gui> and the file chooser will appear.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>Choose the file you want to send and click <gui>Select</gui>.</p>
@@ -79,9 +82,9 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>The owner of the receiving device usually has to press a button to
- accept the file. Once the owner accepts, the
- <gui>Bluetooth File Transfer</gui> progress bar will be shown on your
- screen. Click <gui>Cancel</gui> when the transfer is complete.</p>
+ accept the file. The <gui>Bluetooth File Transfer</gui> dialog will show
+ the progress bar. Click <gui>Close</gui> when the transfer is
+ complete.</p>
</item>
</steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index cbb93a3..ac198d6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="bluetooth" group="#first"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-21" status="candidate"/>
@@ -25,6 +25,11 @@
<email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
<years>2014</years>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+ <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+ <years>2014</years>
+ </credit>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -43,26 +48,24 @@
<if:choose>
<if:when test="platform:unity">
- <p>You can turn Bluetooth on to use Bluetooth devices and send and receive
- files, but turn it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on, click the
- Bluetooth icon in the menu bar and switch <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to
- <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+ <p>You can turn Bluetooth on to connect to other Bluetooth devices, or turn
+ it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on, click the Bluetooth icon in
+ the menu bar and switch <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
</if:when>
- <p>You can turn Bluetooth on to use Bluetooth devices and send and receive
- files, but turn it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on:</p>
+
+ <p>You can turn Bluetooth on to connect to other Bluetooth devices, or turn
+ it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on:</p>
+
<steps>
<item>
- <p>Click the system status area of the top bar.</p>
+ <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+ start typing <gui>Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
- expand.</p>
+ <p>Click on <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to open the panel.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> to open the panel.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
- <p>Set the switch in the titlebar to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
+ <p>Set the switch at the top to <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
</item>
</steps>
</if:choose>
@@ -74,11 +77,11 @@
see a Bluetooth icon in the menu bar. Look for a switch on your computer or
a key on your keyboard. The keyboard key is often accessed with the help of
the <key>Fn</key> key.</p>
- </if:when>
- <p>Many laptop computers have a hardware switch or key combination to turn
- Bluetooth on and off. Look for a switch on your computer or a key on your
- keyboard. The keyboard key is often accessed with the help of the
- <key>Fn</key> key.</p>
+ </if:when>
+ <p>Many laptop computers have a hardware switch or key combination to turn
+ Bluetooth on and off. Look for a switch on your computer or a key on your
+ keyboard. The keyboard key is often accessed with the help of the
+ <key>Fn</key> key.</p>
</if:choose>
<if:choose>
@@ -89,7 +92,8 @@
<p>To turn Bluetooth off:</p>
<steps>
<item>
- <p>Click the system status area of the top bar.</p>
+ <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the
+ right side of the top bar.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
index ce85a32..b876baf 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
@@ -7,10 +7,9 @@
<link type="guide" xref="bluetooth" group="#last"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
-
- <desc>Whether or not other devices can discover your computer.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -21,7 +20,15 @@
<email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
<years>2014</years>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+ <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+ <years>2014</years>
+ </credit>
+
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+ <desc>Let other devices can discover your computer.</desc>
</info>
<title>What is Bluetooth visibility?</title>
@@ -30,27 +37,16 @@
your computer when searching for Bluetooth devices. When Bluetooth is turned
on and the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open, your computer will advertise
itself to all other devices within range, allowing them to attempt to connect
- to you.</p>
-
- <note>
- <p>To indicate that your computer is visible while the <gui>Bluetooth</gui>
- panel is open, the <em>visible name</em> is displayed. The name appears in
- the label above the device list, <gui>Visible as "Jo's Desktop"</gui>, for
- example, and can be <link xref="sharing-displayname">changed</link> from
- the <gui>Sharing</gui> panel.</p>
- </note>
+ to your computer.</p>
- <p>Your computer does not need to be visible to search for other devices, but
- those devices need to be visible for your computer to discover them.</p>
+ <note style="tip">
+ <p>You can <link xref="sharing-displayname">change</link> the name your
+ computer displays to other devices.</p>
+ </note>
<p>After you have
<link xref="bluetooth-connect-device">connected to a device</link>,
neither your computer nor the device needs to be visible to communicate with
each other.</p>
-<!--
- <p>Unless you or someone you trust needs to connect to your computer from
- another device, you should leave visibility off.</p>
--->
-
</page>
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