[gnome-boxes] help: fix, clarify connect, create, sys-reqs pages

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit 7e7a20b85ddb7e531c98eb7674e5d4fab7e0fad2
Author: Alexander Hoffman <alexlhoffman me com>
Date:   Sat Sep 20 11:38:56 2014 -0700

    help: fix, clarify connect, create, sys-reqs pages
    
    https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=737010

 help/C/connect.page             |    3 +--
 help/C/create.page              |   17 ++++++++---------
 help/C/system-requirements.page |    6 +++---
 3 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/connect.page b/help/C/connect.page
index dabe185..4e053d8 100644
--- a/help/C/connect.page
+++ b/help/C/connect.page
@@ -19,8 +19,7 @@
 
   <title>Connect to another computer</title>
 
-  <p><app>Boxes</app> can be used to view and access a remote machine or a
-  remote virtual machine.</p>
+  <p><app>Boxes</app> can be used to view and access a remote physical or virtual machine.</p>
 
   <note style="important">
     <p>The remote machine should already be configured.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/create.page b/help/C/create.page
index 7397262..c6a62b5 100644
--- a/help/C/create.page
+++ b/help/C/create.page
@@ -30,26 +30,25 @@
     <gui style="button">Continue</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>At the wizard's <gui>Source Selection</gui> screen, choose a source
     to determine the type of box you want to create. A local virtual machine
-    can be created by:</p>
+    can be created from:</p>
 
       <list>
-        <item><p>selecting from the list of isos found by <app>Boxes</app>.</p></item>
-        <item><p>inserting installation media in your CD/DVD drive or USB
-        port.</p></item>
-        <item><p>providing a filename or location for an iso file.</p></item>
-        <item><p>providing a URL to connect locally as you would for a
+        <item><p>An ISO found by <app>Boxes</app>.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Installation media on a CD/DVD/USB drive.</p></item>
+        <item><p>A local ISO file (if not found automatically above).</p></item>
+        <item><p>A URL to a remote machine (physical or virtual) through a
         <link xref="connect">remote connection</link>.</p></item>
       </list>
 
       <note style="important">
-        <p>If your iso or installation media supports <gui>Express Installation</gui>,
+        <p>If your installation media supports <gui>Express Installation</gui>,
         the installation will proceed without further input.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
 
     <item><p>After making your selection, or providing the necessary
-    information, click <gui style="button">Continue</gui>. The <gui>Review</gui>
-    page opens.</p></item>
+    information, click <gui style="button">Continue</gui>, which will take you to 
+    the <gui>Review</gui> page.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui style="button">Customize</gui> to adjust memory or
     disk size, or to rename the box.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui style="button">Create</gui>.</p></item>
diff --git a/help/C/system-requirements.page b/help/C/system-requirements.page
index 37eec10..cbd575a 100644
--- a/help/C/system-requirements.page
+++ b/help/C/system-requirements.page
@@ -46,8 +46,8 @@
       <note style="advanced">
       <p>This does not mean that <app>Boxes</app> will allocate 20 GB of space
          when creating the virtual machine. The actual disk space used by
-         <app>Boxes</app> will be less than (or in worst case, equal to) disk
-         space used by virtual machine itself.</p>
+         <app>Boxes</app> will be less than (or in worst case, equal to) the disk
+         space used by the virtual machine itself.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
   <note style="advanced">
     <p><app>Boxes</app> performs best if your computer processor supports
     hardware <link xref="virtualization">virtualization extensions</link> and
-    whether these are enabled in the system BIOS.</p>
+    these are enabled in the system BIOS.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>