[gnome-user-docs] Update Unity conditionals in bluetooth-turn-on-off
- From: David King <davidk src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Update Unity conditionals in bluetooth-turn-on-off
- Date: Sun, 21 Sep 2014 12:21:14 +0000 (UTC)
commit 68c154272d84bbe13aeb18d534d1c02c673916f0
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date: Sun Sep 21 13:20:46 2014 +0100
Update Unity conditionals in bluetooth-turn-on-off
https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=735856
gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page | 24 +++++++++++++++++-------
1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index e647c7e..cbb93a3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -10,8 +10,7 @@
<revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
-
- <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-21" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -26,7 +25,10 @@
<email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
<years>2014</years>
</credit>
+
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+ <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
</info>
<title>Turn Bluetooth on or off</title>
@@ -43,7 +45,8 @@
<if:when test="platform:unity">
<p>You can turn Bluetooth on to use Bluetooth devices and send and receive
files, but turn it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on, click the
- Bluetooth icon in the menu bar and click <gui>Turn On Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
+ Bluetooth icon in the menu bar and switch <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to
+ <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
</if:when>
<p>You can turn Bluetooth on to use Bluetooth devices and send and receive
files, but turn it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on:</p>
@@ -80,8 +83,8 @@
<if:choose>
<if:when test="platform:unity">
- <p>To turn Bluetooth off, click the Bluetooth icon and click
- <gui>Turn Off Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
+ <p>To turn Bluetooth off, click the Bluetooth icon and switch
+ <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
</if:when>
<p>To turn Bluetooth off:</p>
<steps>
@@ -98,7 +101,14 @@
</steps>
</if:choose>
-<note><p>Your computer is <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">visible</link> as
-long as the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open.</p></note>
+<if:choose>
+ <if:when test="platform:unity">
+ <note><p>Your computer is <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">visible</link>
+ if <gui>Visible</gui> is switched to <gui>ON</gui> in the Bluetooth
+ menu.</p></note>
+ </if:when>
+ <note><p>Your computer is <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">visible</link> as
+ long as the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open.</p></note>
+</if:choose>
</page>
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