[gnome-user-docs] Update Unity conditionals in bluetooth-turn-on-off



commit 68c154272d84bbe13aeb18d534d1c02c673916f0
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Sun Sep 21 13:20:46 2014 +0100

    Update Unity conditionals in bluetooth-turn-on-off
    
    https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=735856

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page |   24 +++++++++++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index e647c7e..cbb93a3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -10,8 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-04" status="candidate"/>
-
-    <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-21" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -26,7 +25,10 @@
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Turn Bluetooth on or off</title>
@@ -43,7 +45,8 @@
   <if:when test="platform:unity">
     <p>You can turn Bluetooth on to use Bluetooth devices and send and receive
     files, but turn it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on, click the
-    Bluetooth icon in the menu bar and click <gui>Turn On Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
+    Bluetooth icon in the menu bar and switch <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to
+    <gui>ON</gui>.</p>
   </if:when>
   <p>You can turn Bluetooth on to use Bluetooth devices and send and receive
   files, but turn it off to conserve power. To turn Bluetooth on:</p>
@@ -80,8 +83,8 @@
 
 <if:choose>
   <if:when test="platform:unity">
-    <p>To turn Bluetooth off, click the Bluetooth icon and click
-    <gui>Turn Off Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
+    <p>To turn Bluetooth off, click the Bluetooth icon and switch
+    <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
   </if:when>
   <p>To turn Bluetooth off:</p>
   <steps>
@@ -98,7 +101,14 @@
   </steps>
 </if:choose>
 
-<note><p>Your computer is <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">visible</link> as
-long as the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open.</p></note>
+<if:choose>
+  <if:when test="platform:unity">
+    <note><p>Your computer is <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">visible</link>
+    if <gui>Visible</gui> is switched to <gui>ON</gui> in the Bluetooth
+    menu.</p></note>
+  </if:when>
+  <note><p>Your computer is <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">visible</link> as
+  long as the <gui>Bluetooth</gui> panel is open.</p></note>
+</if:choose>
 
 </page>


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