[gnome-user-docs] Start reviewing bluetooth-connect-device

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit cc5764f7bfca22587126ee5680b89183624d22c7
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Sep 20 17:01:54 2014 +0100

    Start reviewing bluetooth-connect-device

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page |   26 ++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
index 14c1af7..6f4c3ba 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
@@ -8,12 +8,10 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="sharing-bluetooth"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.2" date="2013-05-16" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.3" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" date="2013-05-16" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-09" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-23" status="candidate"/>
 
-    <desc>Pair Bluetooth devices.</desc>
-
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
@@ -30,7 +28,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Pair Bluetooth devices.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Connect your computer to a Bluetooth device</title>
@@ -41,24 +42,21 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the system status area of the top bar.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth</gui>. The Bluetooth section of the menu will
-      expand.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Bluetooth</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Bluetooth Settings</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Bluetooth</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Make sure Bluetooth is enabled: the switch in the titlebar should be
-      set to <gui>ON</gui>. With the panel open and the switch <gui>ON</gui>,
-      your computer will begin searching for devices.</p>
+      <p>Make sure Bluetooth is enabled: the switch at the top should be set to
+      <gui>ON</gui>. With the panel open and the switch <gui>ON</gui>, your
+      computer will begin searching for devices.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Make the other Bluetooth device
       <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">discoverable or visible</link> and
-      place it within 10 meters (about 33 feet) of your computer.</p>
+      place it within 5-10 meters (about 16-33 feet) of your computer.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click the device in the <gui>Devices</gui> list. The panel for the